|Reviews for Honest Liar|
| dlhk chapter 11 . 10/1/2012
Gah! So so sad. Is this when it ended? When their marriage was no longer salvageable? If only he could have been honest with Bella. And why the smile? Was she pregnant?! She said she got prettier a few weeks before. Ugh. I want to cry.
| dlhk chapter 10 . 10/1/2012
Gah! Sooo good. This was an amazing chapter. Edward's love is so intense. I hope they can fix things soon. -mommyofboth
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
Oh, my! I had a feeling that was going to happen as soon as I read that
Wren was waiting for her mother, and Alice's response. *sigh* I love and
simultaneously hate this story! It is so real. your writing is so very raw,
| Eduardiana chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
I love this story and this Edward more and more with each chapter.
"There is only one person I really need" The saddest thing is that he had her, but she wasn't enough then. Will she be enough now? Jasper was right "You became this with her by your side" But he needs Bella, he is surrounded by so much pain, so many sad stories. It was endearing to read how happy he was when Bella agreed to meet with him:"I am high on possibilities" And I loved Jasper's tale about the butterfly.
"...close enough that I can see every sin in her eyes" beautiful
"I told you not to call me on Saturdays" I like that there is always a meaning even behind the most simple words.
I can't wait to read about his meeting with Bella and Wren, about his overdose and Rose's story.
Thank you, thank you for sharing your beautiful words with us!
| roxiegirl chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
Wow. Wow. Rose is Wren's mother? What a mess!
And thank you! Gosh I hope this has an HEA. :)
| diana2012 chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
Thank you for the chapter. please post soon.
| MK543 chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
Jasper's story... a good one. Edward is just so ... frustrating to me and I'm sure to Bella! "Let Us Down Easy" by Ryan Adams... sending a song your way.
| stormy315 chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
great chapter...rose is wrens mother? what is edwards relationship with the girl? cant wait for the next chapter...
| Erikajo chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
Great twist! This is such a well written story. Makes me feel so hopeless which means brilliant writing. :)
| 2old4fanfic chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
children and dogs will love the most despicable people. cats are pickier
| MissBell29 chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
Your updates always leave me breathless.
| NPakus chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
so so sad.. it makes my heart hurt...burns me when I'm leaving your beautiful words..still searching for hope
| katmiles77 chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
Oh no! Poor Wren! I bet Edward's stomach is at his feet right now.
| debslmac chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
| villanova chapter 12 . 10/1/2012
This story is beautiful, and painful. I love it.