Reviews for Honest Liar
HEA-Girl chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Wait Wrens not really Edwards right? Running back to recheck.

This was so sad to read about Bella and Wren together. Why Edward? :(

Thanks so much for the back to back updates.
HEA-Girl chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
"I got a vasectomy alright?" I spit at her.

Damn, even know I knew it was coming it still burned. Such heartbreakingly beautiful words you write...
ivorysin13 chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Your story is absolutely breathtaking. It makes my heart weep. It's just incredible and powerful and I am so very much in love with it. Thank you.
Kitty Bad chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
I didn't review the last chapter, but it broke my heart, just like this one. I guess it makes sense that if Edward had a fucked up childhood, he might react by being determined not to have any of his own. Such a betrayal of Bella, though.

It made this chapter's interaction between Bella and Wren so much more poignant, but.. You keep alluding to the fact that Bella's life has changed a lot. In what ways? Has she remarried? Does she have children?
villanova chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Really hearbreaking, but brilliant. There isn't much fanfiction out there at the moment which can still do that. Thank you for this story and double quick update.
Pyejammies chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
In the UK we call roly-polies pill woodlice. What will Edward do with the info that Wren has given him? He knows what a dangerous path her mother is on.
FFpassion chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
They make such a beautiful family all together.
Wren is such a sweetheart, breaks my heart knowing she's had to see and live with such terrible things her mother has exposed her to :(
Thank you so much for the update, loved it.
love
Irene
xxxx
namemeamy chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Oh, Wren. I wanna hug the little tiara-wearing, roly poly loving princess! -A
Guest chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Your killing me. I love your story. Bella has their kid. Does she think wren is his. The slow burn is such sweet wicked torture.
longtobeme chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
My heart aches for Edward.
HollBeth chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
I guess I'm still a little confused...I don't THINK Wren is Edward's, especially if he wasn't lying after that last "before" chapter, but then I wonder...and I wonder if Bella knows she's not his? Or am I wrong? I'm so confused.

I also didn't think they'd been apart for a super-long time, but it sounds like they have. Sad...
majose chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Damn! You broke my heart with Wren. I want so much better for her and it seems that she needs to be removed from her mother's care. How long has it been since the divorce and him being sober? Not that the uncertainty matter
NPakus chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
This is probably my favorite chapter! So beautiful and sad and hopeful, too. These updates always leave me yearning for more, especially more to hope for...
smooshie55 chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Can you quit work? Because I could get used to this. Wonderful as usual, thank you.
MsLiss chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
Addiction ruins everyone in its wake.
Without trust, love is not enough, a life together is not sustainable,
He has just confirmed her truth - " i dont know you"

Run Bella Run save yourself you cant help someone who does want to help themselves
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