Reviews for Through the Caves of Despair: a Ninjago fanfic
AppleSun chapter 4 . 8/11
Guest chapter 4 . 2/16
i really liked it
Nalash Polal Falayt chapter 4 . 1/23
This is really epic. Jay being scared that his talking would make things worse is kinda relatable. I think Kai have forgiven him during some point through the mission. Your stories have intresting indepth to the characters minds.
Vixenlovesninjago chapter 4 . 8/19/2015
BfwNgFiymTnsgirl chapter 4 . 6/25/2015
He said he wouldn't babble anymore, but that's exactly what he did, lol. Good ol' Jay.
bookworm563 chapter 4 . 11/26/2014
:) I love this story! For some reason Jay is my favorite! Is that weird...?
Djakcinsb chapter 4 . 7/22/2014
I liked how you kept all of the characters in character. Well done!
Ninjago-Yoai chapter 4 . 5/26/2014
Loved it
lexi chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Can you do one with nya and jay recuse the ninja and wu
FishE1 chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
Haha, Zane's right. Jay's always going to be the talkative one, there's no doubt about that!
awyeah21 chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
I bet I can beat Jay's babbling! *takes deep breath to start*

Nah, just kidding. :D Anyway, I felt bad when Jay still wouldn't talk in the beginning, but I was happy to see him talk in the end! And good for Kai to stand up to Jay. :D
AlphaGirl404 chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
Well Jay and the ninjas got the nunchucks back, Jay didn't get punish by Wu, Jay began talking again, Kai and Jay apologized. HAPPY ENDING :D
StarrKiwi chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
This is awesome. Thanks for writing it!
AlphaGirl404 chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
Jay not talking, thats new. Nice work on the chapter
awyeah21 chapter 3 . 7/27/2012
This must be really hard for Jay. D: Jay talks a lot...

Well, he'll talk in the next chapter, right? :D I KNOW HE WILL! *declares*
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