Reviews for The True Master of Death
LoveSpock chapter 20 . 9/24
I really like your story. Looking forward to more.

ladybug-doodlebug chapter 13 . 5/16
Great story. I must say that Dumbledore did kill people by going and stealing blood and organs from the hospitals. He killed the people who needed the blood and/or the organs. He is not thinking of the muggles as people here. That is disappointing! :( Plus, I don't believe he would be able to steal organs though because of the rush for Doctors to get it to the recipient.
ladybug-doodlebug chapter 11 . 5/16
I do not believe that Augusta would be a good guardian for Harry in this case. He is traumatized and does not need a firm hand.
Kallanit chapter 17 . 4/22
It's fanon that Susan's parents died, not canon. See my author's note at the end of chapter 8 of my story, Reboot.
The Geeky Folkteller chapter 20 . 4/17
The irony of the punishment is that if they had done nothing Neville would have gotten hurt anyway because Hooch didn't see fit to do anything about the situation. At least the boys gave enough of a damn to do something.
articdranzer chapter 4 . 4/17
Dumbledore cannot really justify his had choices. He is correcting one by moving Harry to Leaky. But if his trust vault had so much money, why not talk about the rest of it. Why no review what happened to Sirius.
Canon Dumbledore cannot be considered a good man at all. Here too he is just scheming away. okay be his reckoning comes in the future chapters..)
jhechavarria chapter 2 . 4/17
yeah, i dont know. if i didn't read the first chapter, i might actually have enjoyed this story.

as i said, time travel/reincarnation stories with memory loss just seem conceptually pointless to me. will a more powerfull harry not die by basilisk venom? will he not get smashed by a troll, will dumbledore interfere with his home life even though he never did before?
i'd prefer smart/experienced 17 year old harry avoiding mistakes and building his life and future more, than this naive kid stumbling through it all over again.
jhechavarria chapter 1 . 4/17
great 1st hapter. i just feel its redundant. whats the point of all of this if harry can't remember any of it.
the whole point of going back in time is to prevent your past mistakes. this whole chapter was just there to tell us harry is powerfull now and the horcrux is gone?
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 20 . 4/17
A great chapter here.
starboy454 chapter 20 . 4/17
Mexican update these word to reading more of your story
LeftmostDuck chapter 1 . 4/17
Absolutely hate this story
Ep chapter 20 . 4/16
Excellent chapter 1 . 4/16
I never understand the point of stories that send a person back in time without their memories. You might as well just delete the whole first chapter with death and have the story start whenever you like and have it take off in whichever direction you want it to.
Ariadne Venegas chapter 19 . 4/16
I think it is food you can better it as you go. If you try to remake it, you will stop writing, it happen a lot, because you will never find it good enough.
So better try better the new chapter, close plotholes and inconsistent part there.

But I think is really good material. So please continue.

I hope Harry or someone can get that Neville Wand is not suited for him. Also Neville uncle did not good by Neville, I always though that Neville problem is a block in his magic by his parent or maybe is trauma becuase of what happened.
aradia1967 chapter 19 . 4/9
Love The story so far please update soon
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