Reviews for The True Master of Death
Coul532003 chapter 4 . 1/13
I try not to review to stories that are not currently being updated, but just want to say a small something. So far, I am enjoying this story, and thank you for sharing it with us. Next, I am surprised, but not disappointed, in the minor changes to Dumbledore so far. I am not used to seeing this level of compassion from him. I could see the plot Device that Death might have been waiting until Dumbledore reviewed his memories to give him his future memories, or any of several other contrivances, but I have to agree that without some different direction, there would not be much hope for a different outcome. That said, it could even be that the difference in Dumbledore could spur a different approach to the future. As this is the first time I am reading this story, I look forward to seeing where this story goes. I hope that you may be able to find enough renewed interest to continue the story to completion. If not, again thank you for sharing.
LaEmporoar chapter 5 . 7/16/2024
Holy Sh*t! I didnt know Tom was Batman! Lol, good chap
Andromedanaea chapter 2 . 4/25/2024
so this is just a repeats of cannon, except Harry is more powerful?
BlindFaunusGirl chapter 20 . 12/9/2023
Enjoying the story thus far. Looking forward to the next update.
LoveSpock chapter 20 . 9/24/2023
I really like your story. Looking forward to more.

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ladybug-doodlebug chapter 13 . 5/16/2023
Great story. I must say that Dumbledore did kill people by going and stealing blood and organs from the hospitals. He killed the people who needed the blood and/or the organs. He is not thinking of the muggles as people here. That is disappointing! :( Plus, I don't believe he would be able to steal organs though because of the rush for Doctors to get it to the recipient.
ladybug-doodlebug chapter 11 . 5/16/2023
I do not believe that Augusta would be a good guardian for Harry in this case. He is traumatized and does not need a firm hand.
Kallanit chapter 17 . 4/22/2023
It's fanon that Susan's parents died, not canon. See my author's note at the end of chapter 8 of my story, Reboot.
The Geeky Folkteller chapter 20 . 4/17/2023
The irony of the punishment is that if they had done nothing Neville would have gotten hurt anyway because Hooch didn't see fit to do anything about the situation. At least the boys gave enough of a damn to do something.
articdranzer chapter 4 . 4/17/2023
Dumbledore cannot really justify his had choices. He is correcting one by moving Harry to Leaky. But if his trust vault had so much money, why not talk about the rest of it. Why no review what happened to Sirius.
Canon Dumbledore cannot be considered a good man at all. Here too he is just scheming away. okay be his reckoning comes in the future chapters..)
jhechavarria chapter 2 . 4/17/2023
yeah, i dont know. if i didn't read the first chapter, i might actually have enjoyed this story.

as i said, time travel/reincarnation stories with memory loss just seem conceptually pointless to me. will a more powerfull harry not die by basilisk venom? will he not get smashed by a troll, will dumbledore interfere with his home life even though he never did before?
i'd prefer smart/experienced 17 year old harry avoiding mistakes and building his life and future more, than this naive kid stumbling through it all over again.
jhechavarria chapter 1 . 4/17/2023
great 1st hapter. i just feel its redundant. whats the point of all of this if harry can't remember any of it.
the whole point of going back in time is to prevent your past mistakes. this whole chapter was just there to tell us harry is powerfull now and the horcrux is gone?
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 20 . 4/17/2023
A great chapter here.
starboy454 chapter 20 . 4/17/2023
Mexican update these word to reading more of your story
LeftmostDuck chapter 1 . 4/17/2023
Absolutely hate this story
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