|Reviews for Ghosts|
| the Oracle of Akemi chapter 18 . 7/3
Is this story discontinued? I really hope it isn't because it is one of my favourite stories... :(
| SeramPangeran chapter 18 . 9/2/2015
This is really cool! I'm really interested in who's the one killing these people and more of Alfred and Arthur's past. Maybe the mysterious ghost in the fire is involved...
| Shirokira chapter 18 . 2/6/2015
i don't know if this is a late comment or anything but this story is on my top list of fanfics i read! I mean, the moment i started reading it, i couldn't stop! Although you knowing a whole lot about ghost stuff is suspicious, i would really love an update on this story! It gives me the chills everytime i read it! (And probably when i go to the restroom alone) but please update soon :3
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/20/2014
Great chapter! Hope you update soon
| DarkAngels1112 chapter 18 . 7/27/2014
So I can't help but feel like this is strangely like season 1&2 of supernatural. I dunno probs just me but the demon was attacking people for no reason to find someone to lead the armies of hell. Except this guy is killing people not making them psychic... but whatever. I totally suspect ivan. Then again always expect the unexpected!
| Israelle ParadiseIsis Hypnosis chapter 18 . 7/27/2014
I liked this chapter, and I am looking forward to the next one!
Will wait for the next chapter and thanks for updating!
| FadingEcho12193 chapter 18 . 7/25/2014
Hope you update soon :3
| Quintessential Antagonist chapter 18 . 7/25/2014
Horray for an update! Though I understand how awkward it feels to get back into writing after a while, even if you have the time - heck, I'm going through that myself! So I sympathise, friend, I sympathise.
And now we're in the most awesome location imaginable, also known as Gilbert (and Ludwig's) house! (I noticed the chew toys - Luddy has his dogs? :D Since, you know, I'm guessing they're not for Gilbert...) Of course Gil would be too lazy to go and find his own house. XD
Aww, Francis is mopey - concerned about Arthur, perhaps? And does this mean Ludwig and Feliciano are living together? O-O
Ah, Arthur is most certainly different from the punk you know him as, Gilbert. But he actually prepared for once!
Wait to state the obvious, Alfred. XD Though I've still no idea what the motive is, but the MO of the killer does clear things up a little...Oh dear, our two detectives have nothing to go on. And an invisible murderer to top it all off.
Feliks disguised as a mannequin? Well, if Russia can dressed up as a panda, then why not? Oh dear though, a team composed of he, Arthur and Gilbert - Arthur's going to end up wishing he stayed in the hospital...
I like the cute little filler chapters, and this was a nice reprieve from the story's angsty side. Can't wait to read more. :D
| Purestrongpoem chapter 18 . 7/23/2014
| Sora Resi chapter 18 . 7/21/2014
i think we needed a bit of light-heartedness, all things considered ;)
| Quintessential Antagonist chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
I'm not entirely sure how to begin this review...
Oh well, looks like I just did.
Brilliant is a word with a myriad of meanings, all of which can be applied to this story. You create the perfect mix of tension and humour, with a good sprinkling of mystery thrown in there. I think it the idea that Feliciano hears, not sees, ghosts is very clever, and I like how you used his ever-closed eyelids to the plot's advantage. I could also clearly picture Ludwig working in the restaurant just because Feli asked. ;)
Your portrayal of Gilbert and Lovino was spot on, as was Toris' and Feliks'. You got a very good shape on Ivan as a villain, and the flashback of Alfred and Arthur's meeting was very sweet (I like how you write their relationship, by the way.) It didn't drag on, yet provided enough information to keep me satisfied.
On the subject of pairings: You mentioned in an earlier chapter about ones to include, and I was wondering if there'd be any Giripan (GreeceXJapan)? Perhaps Kiku could have Herakles as a ghostly companion? He seems rather lonely, poor lad.
Also, is Franada completely out of the question? I understand that they probably won't interact, so maybe it's not very logical...
I'm awfully worrying for requesting two, especially since UsUk, my OTP, is already here. I'm just a terribly greedy person, please don't mind me. :)
Anyway, all in all, brilliant fic and I eagerly await the next update.
| Okaii chapter 17 . 12/27/2013
My favourite characters are Ivan and Arthur, so seeing them react slightly is like...
Its really good.
| TheAmericanFanGirl chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
I already love everyone
| Sketchy-d00d chapter 17 . 12/22/2013
Ivan why you so creepy!? ;3; so creepy... So creepy... Dang he's my favourite character yet I hate him in this story... -Cat.
| Sketchy-d00d chapter 13 . 12/22/2013
One hint, us Americans don't typically say "auntie". -Cat.