|Reviews for God of Agony|
| Nigihayami Kawaishi Yumeshima chapter 10 . 4/22/2013
Hmmm... After reading this I couldn't help but think you might've been thinking about a continuation for this for Zenkutsu. I really felt like I was hanging on a cliff there... Still, this story was AMAZING! I love your ideas on how Nagato has that dream that shows him all of the paths. I also love how accurately you portrayed each. Most writers can't even name all of the paths (but I can XP). Here are my critiques: I really think Konan should have been more melancholy and static after Yahiko died. Just a bit more depressed than you have portrayed. More "dead inside." Also, as I have mentioned before, you really should find a way, if you haven't already, to put Zenkutsu somewhere where he won't still be around during the time when akatsuki is gathering biju.
Anyways, I love this story and i wish you good luck with the rest of yours. You're very talented!
| KanamexYuukiLover chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
I feel for them. :(
| Almightyking101 chapter 10 . 6/26/2012
EPIC, shall i say. No, wait, let me say it again. EPICCCCC.
Hanzo is no match for Deva path.
So Zenkutsu is Nagato and Konan's child. Are you going to make a fan-fiction on him also.
If you are, I know it will be amazing.
Thanks for the story.
and im looking forward to your next story.
| Almightyking101 chapter 9 . 6/26/2012
The Six Paths of Pein are finally together!
| Almightyking101 chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
wow, Konan has no stomach. Keep it going Nagatooooo!
| Almightyking101 chapter 7 . 6/26/2012
haha, Konan was surprised on Yahiko's showing up.
Deva path is the best!
| Almightyking101 chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
i like this chapter. Short and sweet.
| Almightyking101 chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
like how you described how nagato got the bodies.
| Almightyking101 chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
The paths are talking with eachother?
anyways, nice chapter. keep it going
| Almightyking101 chapter 3 . 6/26/2012
romance between Nagato and Konon. lol epic.
| Almightyking101 chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
the ame-orphans are awesome.
Like how you focus on all three except for one.
| Almightyking101 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
since you uploaded all of the chapters simutaneously, I have read the whole story already. But i am going to review each and every one of them.
Nice opening chapter. I could already feel the tension building up in the story