|Reviews for Protect and Serve: To Honor|
| nemesisswan chapter 1 . 1/4
I've no idea what did you write but I've seen here descriptions that could be the plot of some porn movies - meaning your descriptions couldn't be any worse. And you have written a long story not some short erotic story. Right now it feels like getting a book knowing some pages are missing and I have to look for them somewhere - it can kill all joy of reading. What's more, I am sitting on the train a lot - like 20 hours in total every week. Reading on my phone is hard enough - not to mention expensive because the cost for my turtle-like slow mobile internet is ridiculously high (my father and his brilliant attitude "Hey, who needs this unknown thing like internet if you can have free call to three chosen numbers if it only means this internet thing will be as expensive as possible in out country" ...). You can imagine my willingness to waste both time and money I could spent on about 5 conversations with people (I'm not kidding, this bloody internet is THAT expensive...) to look for missing parts of chapters. :( That's why I am using my PC to say I am sorry but I can't even this story a chance - too much text to read in front of my computer while I have too much free time while sitting on the train everyday. :(
Because of my English I might have sounded kind of rude - if so then I am sincerely sorry. (Once a girl got royally pi..ed at me because she thought I called her a pervert. 'Till this day I've no idea how I had managed to achieve such huge misunderstanding while writing a review so now it's better to warn beforehand).
| Tiki chapter 6 . 12/12/2014
This is still my favorite lord of the rings story and this chapter is my favorite out of all of them. I fallowed you on wattpad since the first chapter was posted there. You probably don't remember me but my username was medinahabiba there. Anyways I was wondering are you going to post that second one shot to the two endings ?
| jshaw0624 chapter 8 . 11/12/2014
I just found this story and I just read "chapter 7 extended version"
"I am at your disposal"
Holy hell! Ok...so I very active and vivid imagination and that one little comment from Legolas...let's just say HOT!
| writermom44 chapter 15 . 11/10/2014
This was a very good story. Made me laugh and bawl my eyes out. Which means I loved it.
| jandeplus5 chapter 15 . 10/9/2014
amazing fics! lpve the fact that it was a marysue with attitude and who didnt magically pick up any wespon and be fantastic at it LOVE these stories. going to have to check out you other works!
| Pineapple3000 chapter 5 . 9/28/2014
Doesn't Lane still have her guns? There were some bullets left, no?
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/19/2014
After reading your trilogy, I decided to read both of the epilogues. And you were right - I read the second because I needed a happier ending to stop crying, but the first one is definitely better. More realistic, painfully emotional and left me desperate ( I really shouldn't let fictional characters get to me the way they do ) . Great job, incredible style of writing, perfect plot.
| pourquoibella chapter 15 . 4/3/2014
This is the first time in over 10 years I've read a story with such a perfect ending. Ex that - probably one of THE best endings to any tale/story/movie/ANYTHING I have ever known. I cannot even form words to seriously express how amazing this is and was. I feel empty because it's finished but simultaneously so full of emotions and appreciation. Thank you for posting, writing, and thinking through this masterpiece. Excuse me while I go cry some more happy tears (also a first in years).
| jada951 chapter 15 . 3/13/2014
what a well crafted story w/ more twists and turns than I come to find in most ff.
i have to admit being a sucker for a happy ending too.
i think they did deserve it.
thank you for sharing your talent and hard work in tale!
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
book three geting good thanks
| spriggan chapter 15 . 2/8/2014
Yay! great trilogy. I must say I like this ending better, though both are too sad for my tastes. Still I have to appreciate great writing.
| blueskyangel11 chapter 15 . 1/24/2014
I know it has been a long time since this series was published, but I only stumbled upon it a few days ago. I thought it best to review once I finished reading it all. Truth be told, I didn't have the courage to read the more realistic alternative ending because the original ending put me to tears.
Nonetheless, this series was so beautifully written that it brought so many emotions in my heart while I was reading it. From beginning to end, although it was in a fictional setting, it was just so realistic. From her arrival to her end, it didn't have the little things that made me think: "that's not possible."
It was truly a great pleasure to read, and I do hope you know that you are an amazing writer. (:
| Eistla chapter 15 . 12/6/2013
I have no courage to read the other ending. Your writing brings forth such realistic world with characters whose fate feels so tangible I know the alternative ending would haunt me for too long time.
That said I would have liked you to write this ending with more thoroughly. Like is it now, it feels shallow, mere shadow compared to your writing otherwise.
Even then - your skill in writing is amazing and I feel great satisfaction to have been able to know Elayna and her story.
| arabella chapter 15 . 12/4/2013
You scared me with that first epilogue, I was ready to starts throwing axes and removing heads, but with this I am content. I wish it could have been happier but it's better than the first epilogue that's for sure. Great story overall! I intend to be a movie director so I hope to tell stories as enrapturing as yours.
| rearviewxmirrors chapter 15 . 11/25/2013
I cried. Surprisingly more in this happier anding than I did in the other one. This trilogy was absolutely amazing! I am sad to see it go. I will however read the oneshot and review it. You are an amazing writer and I with you would please write more!