Reviews for Protect and Serve: To Honor
Guest chapter 15 . 7/16
Love this trilogy and actually love the tragic version of the ending. I'm a sucker for having my guts ripped out.
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 14 . 7/10
very sad but I agree that it is more realistic then being cursed and sent to a fantasy world
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 7 . 7/7
i love when he calls her elaina love. as horrible as it seems i did find it odd that she never said she was raped while held captive. gods i just adore them! lol legolas turning all arrogant when he sees her look at the end
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 6 . 7/6
uh I thought you already agreed to get married?
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 3 . 7/3
i dont remember but can she just read minds or can she send her thoughts to people as well? i think its cute how she will read legolas' mind when its to loud or stressful. aw i love pippin hes so damn adorable. faramir i always liked him in the movie i hope when i read the book i like him just as much! jesus she is crazy
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 2 . 7/3
wow ive only seen the movies and this is a major difference between him in the movie he was completely crazy in the movies I am definitely going to need to read the books soon I like him way better in your version which is based off of the books so I will need to read them
nemesisswan chapter 1 . 1/4
I've no idea what did you write but I've seen here descriptions that could be the plot of some porn movies - meaning your descriptions couldn't be any worse. And you have written a long story not some short erotic story. Right now it feels like getting a book knowing some pages are missing and I have to look for them somewhere - it can kill all joy of reading. What's more, I am sitting on the train a lot - like 20 hours in total every week. Reading on my phone is hard enough - not to mention expensive because the cost for my turtle-like slow mobile internet is ridiculously high (my father and his brilliant attitude "Hey, who needs this unknown thing like internet if you can have free call to three chosen numbers if it only means this internet thing will be as expensive as possible in out country" ...). You can imagine my willingness to waste both time and money I could spent on about 5 conversations with people (I'm not kidding, this bloody internet is THAT expensive...) to look for missing parts of chapters. :( That's why I am using my PC to say I am sorry but I can't even this story a chance - too much text to read in front of my computer while I have too much free time while sitting on the train everyday. :(
Because of my English I might have sounded kind of rude - if so then I am sincerely sorry. (Once a girl got royally pi..ed at me because she thought I called her a pervert. 'Till this day I've no idea how I had managed to achieve such huge misunderstanding while writing a review so now it's better to warn beforehand).
Tiki chapter 6 . 12/12/2014
This is still my favorite lord of the rings story and this chapter is my favorite out of all of them. I fallowed you on wattpad since the first chapter was posted there. You probably don't remember me but my username was medinahabiba there. Anyways I was wondering are you going to post that second one shot to the two endings ?
jshaw0624 chapter 8 . 11/12/2014
I just found this story and I just read "chapter 7 extended version"

"I am at your disposal"

Holy hell! Ok...so I very active and vivid imagination and that one little comment from Legolas...let's just say HOT!
writermom44 chapter 15 . 11/10/2014
This was a very good story. Made me laugh and bawl my eyes out. Which means I loved it.
jandeplus5 chapter 15 . 10/9/2014
amazing fics! lpve the fact that it was a marysue with attitude and who didnt magically pick up any wespon and be fantastic at it LOVE these stories. going to have to check out you other works!
Pineapple3000 chapter 5 . 9/28/2014
Doesn't Lane still have her guns? There were some bullets left, no?
Guest chapter 14 . 6/19/2014
After reading your trilogy, I decided to read both of the epilogues. And you were right - I read the second because I needed a happier ending to stop crying, but the first one is definitely better. More realistic, painfully emotional and left me desperate ( I really shouldn't let fictional characters get to me the way they do ) . Great job, incredible style of writing, perfect plot.
pourquoibella chapter 15 . 4/3/2014
This is the first time in over 10 years I've read a story with such a perfect ending. Ex that - probably one of THE best endings to any tale/story/movie/ANYTHING I have ever known. I cannot even form words to seriously express how amazing this is and was. I feel empty because it's finished but simultaneously so full of emotions and appreciation. Thank you for posting, writing, and thinking through this masterpiece. Excuse me while I go cry some more happy tears (also a first in years).
jada951 chapter 15 . 3/13/2014
what a well crafted story w/ more twists and turns than I come to find in most ff.

i have to admit being a sucker for a happy ending too.

i think they did deserve it.

thank you for sharing your talent and hard work in tale!
195 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »