|Reviews for Protect and Serve: To Honor|
| Glory Bee chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
I read the extended version and want to say thanks for offering that. Those chapters are not too explicit and would not likely be banned here anyways but I can appreciate you not wanting to take the risk. I certainly do not object to any chapters that are Lane/Legolas centric as I most want to hear their story. :)
| Zach of death chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
Ah romance, done so much these days but rarely done well, you are one of the few who does it good.
| KnoKnayme chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
| srade9779 chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
well a great chapter once again. just keep writing
| Zach of death chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
When I first saw this story, I was interested to say the least, and I raced to read the other two stories so I would know what the hell was going on. Now that I am up to date, I applaud the story of lane and I hope to see how this tale ends.
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
I loved it i have been waiting for the next chapter
| Karasu-LaoHu chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
Nice, I like the insight into lane's past
| EmilyEverlasting chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
I guess I'll just review for the unedited version here...
Great chapter! Legolas is one understanding elf. I'm glad you showed he wasn't perfect, that makes him like thirty times more likable.
| Gollykins chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
I've been following your stories at the other places you posted them, and I think that your characterization and plot action matches the better fiction writers out there.
Bravo! Bravo fortissimo!
I have noticed that you kept Lane's Fae relatives out of play in the storyline. That surprised me: I kept expecting some relative to have put in an earlier appearance in Middle Earth and to have soured the Eldar, the Istarii, the Valar, or the Stewards of Gondor. You didn't and your fiction worked anyway.
I keep wondering what magical force brought Lane to ME to begin with. Could some off-stage power-player's magic have had a role in her trans-location? Will she or he make an on-stage appearance in ME? And what would the Valar do if he or she did?
I'm looking forward to seeing how your story works out as YOU imagine and write it.
| EmilyEverlasting chapter 6 . 8/6/2012
Oh my god, I almost had a heart attack when she was hit by that arrow. Holy crap.
Yay! Legolas returns! I missed his presence, he seems to make everything more positive.
| Lady Minuialwen chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
| Aureleis chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
This is more "bonded" than married, it seems. Yay for long fluffy romantic scenes!
You updated supersuper fast. Thank you (:
| vampirediarieslover123 chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
i think it was awesome update soon please
| KnoKnayme chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
Yay! Wonderful chapter!
| EmilyEverlasting chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
I love the action scenes!
Finally Lane gets some respect, huzzah!