|Reviews for Protect and Serve: To Honor|
| EmilyEverlasting chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
The suspense it building! YAY!
I really really hope Legolas comes back before anything bad happens.
| EmilyEverlasting chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
I never really had any sympathy for Denethor, but he didn't immediately look down on her for being female, hmmmm...
| Countess Millarca chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
I loved this chapter! I read the uncensored version, but decided to leave my review here...Lane was right on her views of fairy tales as far as I am concerned...you never know what happens after the end and I do prefer the more tragic ones such as the original "Little Mermaid", than Disney's adaptation. Anyway, I have to say If I ever do get married, I would prefer such a natural and intimate ceremony than the whole fireworks charade...unfortunately the law states otherwise and I really don't want to have witnesses, if I try what you described haha! Also, I wonder, do men like that exist anymore, I think Lane was right; he is just too perfect, oh well, this IS a fictional story after all :D
| Glory Bee chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
Could you please pm me with the link to the uncensored version as this felt like a bit of a letdown which is not what you had intended.
| Elfwine chapter 6 . 8/3/2012
I really do like the connection you have between Lane and Legolas.
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/2/2012
| srade9779 chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
That marry me kinda got me suprised. It wanst a bad suprise though guess it fits the story. great chapter once again.
| Karasu-LaoHu chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
Well, I should probably reassure you that the battle scenes are not at all lacking!
And this is yet another wonderful chapter!
Oh, I love Lane's sense of humor. It actually kind of matches mine with all of that raunchy goodness. I have been told that my humor is tempered towards the male side of things haha And I can relate alot to Lane since I am constantly considered one of the guys by my peers, and even elders.
Strangely enough, my favorite part is Lane's interaction with Aragorn and the other men, not Legolas... Just not enough of a romantic in me...
And Thank You for not letting her kill the damn Witch King! I HATE when that happens in fanfiction... Lane still gets to keep her Awesome Card and not lose it by becoming a Mary Sue. Although I must say, it would be impossible for her to do it with the whole sensitivity to them that she has...
Anyways, another great chapter and it's sad to think that this story will soon(?) be coming to a close, unless you are continuing after canon...
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
| neko-hime-4ever chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
I have read all of your series so far, and I'm ashamed that this is the first time I'm reviewing for it. But something about this chapter really struck a chord with me. I have no idea what it was, but I felt the need to rave about your story a bit. To be honest, this is one of the absolute best LotR OC stories I have read, and I do read a lot. Lane is such a wonderful character to follow! I find myself letting out very girlish giggles when I get the e-mail saying you've updated. She is so complex, with a past that has everything to do with the woman I have come to admire. Most OC's are shallow, with no thought to the place or setting they came from, and I find the stories are just annoying. But I am always suprised by her resourcefulness and resolve at every encounter, good, bad, or completly different. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for her, and the rest of the company for that matter.
Forgive this long and badly written review (it's late here!), and know that I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
| Lady Minuialwen chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
| KnoKnayme chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Excellent! Awesome ending! Wonderful chapter! You have a knack for capturing emotion, both negative and positive... Which is kind of essential to LOTR. Like a boss!
| Sleepsweetforever chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Loving this story. Great chapter. Can not wait for more.
| Aureleis chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
AHHHHH I can't wait! I'm so glad you posted this chapter right away so that we don't have to wait as long (: I actually cheered out loud when I saw the notification in my inbox.
Lane's going to pay for saving Halbarad, isn't she? Ugh. But it's good that she did.
On the edge of my seat until the next update!
| Glory Bee chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Thanks for keeping Halbarad alive, I never understood why Tolkien chose to kill him off, all it did was create much grief for Aragorn. Anyways it was nice to see his role expanded in your story. I am also very happy to see Legolas back. :)