Reviews for Half In Love
Little Miss Dancer Girl chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This portrays Holden's train of thought PERFECTLY. Love it and can't wait for more.

estrellabrillante chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I think you did a great job! at first i thought it didn't sound like Holden...but then as I kept reading it...i found him and it was all good.3 I really like this! and the quote at the end! that was a nice ending ! make more please!
Rachel Mantegna chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I like it, and I think you should continue :)
Alex chapter 1 . 6/26/2012

I loved it

so much

You might/may have only read the book once, but this was VERY well done. You picked up his mannerisms and Salinger's style of writing very well.

Keep writing! Just make Holden a bit more awkward with Anne, since that's more in character.
DoubleEdgedSword99 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Please write more! This could stand alone as a one-shot, but I'd really like it if you turned it into a multi-chapter story. I think you wrote in Holden's view great, really!