Reviews for Dan Was Falling Towards The Dark
CloCloPuff chapter 6 . 3/3
I did a report on hypothermia and the last stage of it is when the person removes anything that's touching them because it's a stinging sensation to their skin. So I mentally go, "DON'T TAKE YOUR CLOTHES OFF DAN! DON'T TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES!"
CloCloPuff chapter 3 . 3/3
Damnit Danyul! All you needed was a coat! *puts on 5 extra layers*
CloCloPuff chapter 1 . 3/3
I actually just mentally screamed YES IT HAS CHAPTERS
Savie mtz chapter 18 . 2/12
This was so amazing my only negative comment was that it wasn't longer.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/1
Awesome story! Couple things with the medical scenarios though, if he had hypothermia and was unconscious he wouldn't be shivering or moving or moaning, he'd be still. Also, your limbs don't fall off from hypothermia, they may get amputated from lack of circulation and inability to use them..
DivergentWhovianPhan chapter 13 . 6/22/2016
:D 5 stars
Hannah chapter 14 . 4/11/2015
Great Story! : -D : - D
laneygirl168 chapter 2 . 1/10/2015
AH! So good. I've read it again and again. This could be a book, I'm not joking!
laneygirl168 chapter 17 . 12/13/2014
Best fanfiction I've ever read
Amy chapter 5 . 6/17/2014
My mum is a paramedic and i congratulate you for this extremely accurate represennation.
brook graziano chapter 8 . 4/8/2014
I just can't stop reading untill i know Dan is ok. I feel sooooooooo bad 4 Phil
Guest chapter 18 . 2/22/2014
Rose chapter 7 . 10/21/2013
I just wanted to let you know that with hypothermia your limbs stop getting blood then become dead and have to be amputated. Your limbs don't just fall off when you get hypothermia
hi chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
YouTubeFanFiction chapter 18 . 6/26/2013
Thanks for the mention! This was a great fanfic :-)
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