Reviews for The Lie
jk chapter 7 . 3/29
communication is great...using a shit ton of words to repeat the same thing over and over is boring...chapter 7 gots to go
jk chapter 6 . 3/29
scarlett johanson...really? shes fucking so ugly
Ashmerlin chapter 25 . 2/6
Amazing story. It made me laugh and cry and yell and sigh. Great work. Thankyou for sharing it with us.

Alia chapter 20 . 1/10/2016
i thought she was Carlisle daughter
csp4 chapter 25 . 9/27/2015
Absolutely wonderful story! No good ever comes from family secrets but it's still fun to read about them. I get exercise by shaking my head & rolling my eyes. Sometimes I even get off my ass to take a walk 'cause I'm pissed off at one or more character & don't want to smash my fist thru the computer screen::)) Thanks for sharing...3 years ago!
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 25 . 8/30/2015
i know i wasn't a fan of bella but when she admitted that she messed up keeping jake that close it made me feel better. i love that the baby really was edwards. loved the HEA and that there wasn't really cheating :) great story
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 24 . 8/30/2015
poor edward not being able to know his siblings and edward sr, he actually was a good guy and did right by edward but letting charlie keep his reason for being, what a selfless act :)
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 23 . 8/30/2015
sucks renee took the cowards way out but i'm super happy that bella owned up to her mistakes that lead to edward having reasons for doubt other than the babys dna
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 22 . 8/30/2015
happy for them both but still think bella and the others should be more understanding to what edward feels
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 21 . 8/30/2015
can't get over how everyone is all don't give up on bella ... at this point edward has nothing but reasons to think she cheated, and it's her own actions that cause this doubt. you would think bella would have demanded the dna test herself
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 19 . 8/30/2015
all her actions, if i was edward i would have doubted it was my baby. jake taking her to the dr, her telling him about their problem to begin with. cuddling on the couch with jake, him being there all the time without edward...yep, if it was edward with another woman everyone would be in an uproar
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 18 . 8/30/2015
and jake again, if edward had a woman around like jake was bella would be pissed off and have a tantrum. and why in the heck would she need to sit side by side holding hands
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 17 . 8/30/2015
again selfish ... still no apology to edward for her continuing to run to jake's side
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 15 . 8/30/2015
i really really hope edward gets pissed about her kissing jake and the fact that she could only be happy when jake was there. and she should be shamed. talk about selfish
danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 14 . 8/30/2015
what a why to stress herself with worry
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