Reviews for The Lie
greyfunk chapter 2 . 4/20
Are you sure she's a teenager? She more stable and mature than most adults.
greyfunk chapter 11 . 1/6
This is a very strange story.
Lafemmevegeta chapter 25 . 9/14/2014
REALLY GREAT MYSTERY/DRAMA STORY! Very intriguing throughout the entire story line. Thank you for jot making Bella a bitch when Edward came back to her. This is a story about true love regardless of all the lies. I am glad Bella figured everything out. Jake will probably never want to see his half sister! Wonderful story!
geosordino chapter 24 . 6/1/2014
Wow - I really liked this story until this chapter. That Edward lied to Bella, even if he thought he was protecting her, completely changed the whole tone of the story for me. They didn't necessarily need to tell Charlie, but to keep this from Bella is a betrayal in it's own way. Plus, it might have actually helped her come to terms with the relationship she had with her mother, and Renee's choice to end her own life. Your story, you get to decide, but I was disappointed.
Darcyfan14 chapter 25 . 4/8/2014
Wonderful story.
Darcyfan14 chapter 15 . 4/7/2014
OMG ! Renee was with Billy?!
Darcyfan14 chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
Awesome Story.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 25 . 3/22/2014
I really liked this story and even the way it ended Bella knows the truth and so does Edward that's all that matters except their love for each other
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 24 . 3/22/2014
I really don't care who thinks what as long as Edward knows the truth and he does and Bella and Edward are together happy and having a son thatsGREAT
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 23 . 3/22/2014
damn that's not fair she could have left a note now what happens when they have another child divorce come on Bella and Edward didn't do anything wrong why punish them let this truth come out Bella will always be Charley's daughter not matter who fathered her come on PLEASE
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 22 . 3/22/2014
no I want Bella's mother to tell the truth what if they do get bck together and have another child and this happens again then what will Edward do or think come on PLEASE BUT PLEASE LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 21 . 3/22/2014
somebody better get Renee there so she can do some explanning and save Bella and Edwads marriage doesn't matter about Charleys cause they are already dvorced
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 20 . 3/21/2014
Bella is to pale for Billy's baby isn't she maybe not god I so hope he is her brother and will leave her alone
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 19 . 3/21/2014
wonder what that was all about
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 18 . 3/21/2014
so why don't they just on on their honeymoon and get pregnant like Jasper said
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