Reviews for Trouble Sleeping
kat callan chapter 1 . 4/18
This is nice.:)
thingsthatmakeme chapter 1 . 1/14
This is so powerful and emotional! I love their dynamic here! Excellently written!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
Aww this is so sweet
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Very nicely done. This scene felt very real and in character the whole way through. Very emotional too.
jenowatina chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
love this, continue!
breathe-the-ocean-calls chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Can you stop being so perfect. Its overwhelming. Actually please don't stop I love your writing too much.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Ohhh...

This just... break my heart...! D'X

But warming as well...!

Uugghh...

Oh Tony...

Glad Steve there...
SqueeFreak chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
I love it! It's so full of feeling! And I really love how you kept both Tony and Steve in character with this. I've read quite a few stories where the authors turn Tony into this whimpering "hold me please!" mess and, even if that's how he might feel on the inside, I don't think he'd show it. I think it would go a lot like your story, if not exactly like it. XD
BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
It's a great story! Utterly in character.

Favourite parts?
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Steve shrugs. "I assumed you didn't want to be coddled, but if that's what you want, I can shift gears."
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Rika100 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Wow... very sad story, I like it though.
Crystal M. Key chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
This was touching, and just /good/. Thank you. Favorite part:

Tony gets up, and Steve intercepts him before he can reach the coffee machine. Tony's eyes narrow at the obstruction, but Steve stands his ground.

"Why don't we lie down," Steve says. "We can go to the living room, put on a movie. You don't have to sleep, but the caffeine will mess with you."

It's a sign of how utterly exhausted Tony is that he doesn't protest. He lets Steve lead him out of the kitchen and into the living room. His personality flares back up again as Steve lies down on the couch and motions for Tony to lie down on top of him.

"Ah, I see," Tony says. "This is all an excuse to feel me up."

"You know me," Steve says. "I'm all about taking advantage of people."

"I knew you couldn't be good all the time." Tony lies down anyways, his head resting on Steve's chest.
Jenn chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Beautiful. I love it.

As much as I like slash, I'm really glad you didn't write it here. It would have spoiled the story. Sometimes great friendship is the way to go.
Post U Later chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Oh Poor Tony! I Couldn't Even Begin To Contemplate How Terrifying That Must Be. Thank Goodness For Steve.
Professor03 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Aaah that was perfect! Just the cuddles I've been looking for! This was very well written :D
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Very good.
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