|Reviews for The mouse princess|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2015
please continue with writing and updating this
| Pinkie Diane and Surprise Pie chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I am loving this! But...
No offence or anything, but I strongly suggest a beta reader.
I'm not going to sugar coat this, your GRAMMAR needs work!
GRAMMAR IS IMPORTANT! I hardly ever read any stories with run on paragraphs or sentences, and I know many other people who won't even scan a story with bad grammar, but this story has great potential and I would hate to see it stop.
All I can say is if you can't check your own grammar and spelling for any reason, it is is my best interest and personal opinion that you hire a beta reader.