|Reviews for Supreme Dissolution|
| Ayzmara chapter 30 . 3/12
Time for an updated review from my first one, which I just had to stop because some things were just getting on my nerves. Not a whole lot has changed from my first review, but some parts where i stopped in the middle to leave a review (Where it contained my rambling, which I am doing again... ugh. T_T)
I still think there was too much conversation, would have loved more action. Krill is still my favorite for some reason, Miyuki being the other.
Honestly, I was getting bored by the prom bits, and was half tempted to skip over it. I didn't but just skimmed over it instead. The only reason I didn't stop was because of the action bits that you left in the preview.
Overall, I liked the trilogy. You managed to keep me reading until the end, finishing the whole thing in about 3 days. (Yes I am a fast reader)
| sailor-moon-lover1 chapter 9 . 3/13/2014
i didnt read the paragraphs beatie XD i got bored and i was like " eh nope " XD
| angela.dickson.18 chapter 31 . 11/18/2013
UM can someone here tell me what the others are talking about I'm lost and I just read this one already and the first time I did know what they are talking and now this is my second I really don't know what they all are talking about in the last part of this chapter 31 Epilogue ending of this story.
| Kuro.Lunette14 chapter 31 . 8/16/2013
I love this story, love it, love it, love it. I just finished reading all three stories these last two days. I love them, I couldn't put my phone down. It was so worth getting hardly any sleep, I'm barely staying awake now. These three are my favorite Invader Zim stories, in my top ten favorite Yaoi stories. They were cute, fluffy, sexy, funny, so totally awesome. I specially love Keef and Keyvine/Krill, they are so cute. I love Keef's personality, he's awesome. I can't wait for the one shot series, anticipation is killing me. Hope to read more from you! :D Bye bye.
With love and admiration,
| SinTheShadowThief chapter 31 . 5/9/2013
What a TWIST! They played along the whole "I don't remember what happened" act...that's shocking! You, sirs(even though you guys are girls), did a great job with this story. Now here my suggestion...do the wedding, please! I so want to see them in their wedding! Both Zim's and Dib's family and friends together under one roof or whatever place you choose. This story is awesome!
| ritamej chapter 31 . 5/9/2013
And here I was thinking, yea lets lie to our friends, because we all know how well those turn out. But since they know I guess it's okay.
Maybe one of the one-shots could be them finding an invader. Doesn't necessarily have to be at Area 51, it could be like in Egypt or Stonehenge. Maybe Stonehenge was an Irken message that never got finished?
On a different note writing Area 51, auto corrects itself into caps. Weird.
It's sad seeing this story come to an end, but I can't wait to read the others you got planned. I really like this universe so I'm glad we all do have to see it go yet.
Until next story!
| PenguinBandit523 chapter 31 . 5/9/2013
Professor Membrane KNOWS that aliens exist, and he's Okay with it... :O My, the man has come a Long way in such a short amount of time. xD
They really are good friends, though.
The entire ending was really sweet. Honestly, it felt like the ending came on a bit sudden, to me, but that could be because I had guesses of things that still could have happened in the story but didn't, so it was kind of like "oh, it's over already?" Or maybe you're just such an awesome writer that you leave the reader wanting more. (*Pictures plant from Little Shop of Horrors reading fanfiction and crying "Feed Me, authors."* lol)
Well, once again, fantastic story! A great ending to a great trilogy. I'm really happy to have found/read it. )
| ngrey651 chapter 31 . 5/9/2013
Ah! This explains a few things. Thank you for clearing this up! A shame this is the last big story, though. :(
| kitty tokyo uzumaki chapter 31 . 5/9/2013
Aww, what a great ending. So looking forward toward those one shots though. XD I give you lots of love as a fan of your series. XD. And just for this ending I give you all the pocky and cute plushies in the world! Enjoy! X3
| shadowfire21 chapter 31 . 5/9/2013
Loved the ending, well really I loved the whole thing, but I love how you ended it XD
Oh is there going to be another sequel? I'd like to know, so I can keep my eyes out for it
If not, this is still a really good ending,. :)
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/1/2013
Was that the end? Cause if that was the end... Then it was AAWESOME!
| PenguinBandit523 chapter 30 . 5/1/2013
That last little paragraph just screams it all: Something Bad Is Going To Happen! When you think to yourself "everything is going to be alright", that's when all hell breaks loose. I don't know what sort of crazy is about to come, but (in advance), poor Zim.
I hope his mother learns by the end of this that Zim has his own life. Yes, he'll still be there for his family, but now he has Dib, and his friends as another family.
Still can't wait for the wedding. :)
| ritamej chapter 30 . 5/1/2013
Area 51 if they went there Zim might find a cousin who went missing years ago trying to invade Earth or maybe another planet but crashed here and now he's in a tubed in suspended animation till they do their test on him/her.
I'm guessing Tak is never going to be mentioned? Maybe she's the alien stuck in Area 51?
If my family called like that, I would flush the phone.
Congrats on graduation. Though you will start wishing you were back in a year. I'm a couple years out and wish I was 5 again so I can do it again.
| kitty tokyo uzumaki chapter 30 . 4/30/2013
I love them so much. XDDDD I got slytherin wands! XD I found out that is what I am.
| Invadermakayla chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Please update. YOU ARE KILLING ME!
I must know what happens next?