|Reviews for Cancer|
| KhazintheDark chapter 15 . 3h ago
Is she the Warhammer version of the English in your mind?
| Oplindenfep chapter 15 . 18h ago
That's just the thing, Mercer may have been a one man army (I'm going to completely ignore James Heller because he's a terrible character) but he was also a world-class infiltrator and strategist. He doesn't lead small groups of elite soldiers because they would just get in the way. And since your guy is supposed to be the same way, he should assume Mercer's role: leading from behind unless it's too important to leave up to chance, plan around his enemies and infiltrate their organizations, and convert a number of useful, but ultimately expendable infiltrators to work for him.
Instead of leading a squad of soldiers, he leads a cell of independent operators each with their own separate black ops mission.
| giodan chapter 15 . 21h ago
i think this story is popular because is original! i mean: there is a loot of fanfic who have the same idea like super naruto! but there is a litle number of fanfic otuside the box! like your! i mean there no story who even come close to yours!
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/7
Yes you should
| Rhavis chapter 15 . 3/7
"He's just a man" only goes so far until you remember he ate some six top-tier elite assassins.
And last chapter's initial comment about skewering was a funny ass brick joke.
| Unknown Sterata chapter 15 . 3/6
Yeah an update, Did not see him being nutralized like that...but great job at the end.
| speaker of babbel chapter 15 . 3/6
as long as the biscuits have butter, and its none of that whole range shit, i mean the ones with all the fat that is gonna give you a heart attack.
and i take my tea with 1 sugar, no milk
| Dracomancer1 chapter 15 . 3/6
Brilliant! This chapter is leagues above the ones preceding it.
| DaLintyMan chapter 15 . 3/6
Well. That was strange.
The plot thickens...
| WildCard-Yes Man chapter 14 . 1/15
| alex.rushing.5 chapter 14 . 1/11
Out and about and random things are happening constantly.
| Oplindenfep chapter 14 . 1/10
I gotta be honest, this kinda went down hill the moment you had him trying to train an elite unit.
If you could just kind of remove those chapters, and go in a different direction, that'd be great.
| Dracomancer1 chapter 14 . 1/10
Again, very good description writing and reasonable approximation of the train of human thought. Also again, there is no reminder of where the plot is going or why it is where it is. What is the main character and his rag tag bunch of almost-soldiers trying to accomplish? Is it defending the planet in eventually expel the tyranids completely? Is it a temporary defense to evacuate refugees?
A story without even a hint of what the future brings is one that confuses. You rocked on bringing better scenery to your story, I know you can improve on this too.
| thehun222 chapter 13 . 1/6
Great story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Deimos99340 chapter 13 . 1/5
Nice update. Looking forward to the next.