|Reviews for Return to Konoha|
| kingslayer5581 chapter 1 . 9h
Who dafuq ends one-shots with cliffhanger? What is wrong with you?
| NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 1 . 7/17
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD!
ITS SO INTERESTING AND INTENSE AND AMAZING!
OH GOD ITS GOT MY BLOOD ALL PUMPED AND I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!
I CAN FEEL ALL THE EMOTIONS YOU WRITE ABOUT!
THIS IS SO WELL WRITTEN!
SO ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
| Athomas921 chapter 1 . 6/20
i hope u keep going with this story its good so far...
| myeong chapter 1 . 6/9
I love this.
Are you planning to continue this?
| Tohsaka143 chapter 1 . 6/2
This is a prologue, not a one-shot. One-shots have a conclusion.
| Shadow chapter 1 . 4/19
Pls make more
| I Be Random chapter 1 . 3/2
This is a prologue not a one shot. A oneshot has a conclusion that is satisfying this is a cliffhanger. I want to see more of this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
Good needs more chapters
| fuck chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
| Mark chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
Such a cliffhanger ending... should be made into a story / but good idea for a story
| Hmmm12 chapter 1 . 11/6/2016
If it's possible to dislike a story I would dislike this. Not giving a proper ending is just a dick move
| TimothyB chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
Fuck you I hate more then I have any one before. You better come back and continue this story.
| AstroNautica chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
This ending sucked...
| Just a dude chapter 1 . 9/1/2016
| blukmage19r2 chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
I have one thing to say.
And that is, the suspense in this story is unspeakably terrible.