|Reviews for Return to Konoha|
| AstroNautica chapter 1 . 9/8
This ending sucked...
| Just a dude chapter 1 . 9/1
| blukmage19r2 chapter 1 . 8/8
I have one thing to say.
And that is, the suspense in this story is unspeakably terrible.
| Polaruspax chapter 1 . 7/28
Thanks for you know creating something as interesting as this and then saying yea fuck you all im making this a oneshot... TBH this is better then most of your other stories...
| Samiam2468 chapter 1 . 7/23
TWHAT OH NO NO NO NO NO.
GET BACK HERE RIGHT NOW AND FINISH THIS STORY BEFORE I FIND YOU AND KICK YOUR ASS.
YOU CAN NOT JUST LEAVE US LIKE THIS. ON THE EDGE.
IF I DID THAT WITH ANY OF MY STORY'S MY READER WOULD KILL ME SO GET BACK HERE. * Demon voice* NOW DAMN IT.* ominous clap of thunder and evil laugh.
| yanchoco chapter 1 . 6/17
what i think? IMMA CURIOOOOUS! you got me hanging, yeah.. hahahaha. i cant say anything tough.. just, hope you'll update soon, really.. thank you
| Riccardo chapter 1 . 6/15
Ti prego continua la trama è bellissima non puoi abbandonarla così
| Naruto156 chapter 1 . 6/5
I hate you... you get me going with this good plot set up just to end it before it blows up into a masterpiece by fanfiction critique, you my dear author are truly a sadistic man. Your only path to redemption at this point is to finish this story out as everyone hopes it would, a super long, possibly 50 chapter, story.
| Ninja Doctor chapter 1 . 5/25
I love your story! I wish it had more chapters!
| TSUL chapter 1 . 5/20
Argh! damn it! *sobs* I need more..
| Hato aka. The Awesome Prussia chapter 1 . 5/7
please continue it, at least one more chapterCliffhangers are worth 10th circle in hell
| OriksGaming chapter 1 . 4/7
Eh, the ending really wasn't satisfying. It was probably the worst part of the story. It would have been perfect if Naruto killed himself. Maybe that's a bit grim, but I felt like that was what the story was leading up to. Naruto honestly had nothing to live for, he was hated by his entire village, one he was being dragged back to, his parents favored his sister by a wide margin. Suicide would have been a really satisfying ending, especially if he did it in front of his parents.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/26
Make it a 2 shot
| Destiny's Bond chapter 1 . 3/17
I feel like there was a reference to a certain Street Fighter Movie somewhere in here...
| Karosam chapter 1 . 1/13
Please more need more