Reviews for The One Who Got Away
RingTheBella chapter 24 . 12/1/2015
I know it's too late since this story is already complete, but if you write another story in the future, I suggest putting the emails in italic.
RingTheBella chapter 24 . 12/1/2015
I loved Bella's replies to both emailsevery word was just about perfect.
RingTheBella chapter 21 . 12/1/2015
I am so glad she was just being a surrogate. If she had another kid with Jacob I was going to shoot myself.
danqat chapter 36 . 8/6/2015
Lovely story! Would love to read more of your work.
Guest chapter 34 . 5/22/2015
Lol lol hahahahahha wtf now all of a sudden no Edward is nice to Charlie and fucks Bella on the daily so all is forgiven no I hate not finishing a story but this might be the exception it sucks more the Kim sucks dick
Guest chapter 32 . 5/21/2015
Eww gross lady that just had a baby and has sagging boobs and sagging skin sex if Edward is really hot good for him on not being shallow and liking Bella all gross and yeah now I'm just being a jerk I take it back
Guest chapter 31 . 5/21/2015
No they're not it always happens they sick some big event to make Bella see how great Edward is and how she can't live with out him ugh sucks hopefully you stick to your day job every time jake is mentioned I throw up in my mouth a little
Guest chapter 30 . 5/21/2015
She's a mom but she never interacts with her kid sends her to dad which is reasonable then pawns her off to another mom wait sis the mom right?
Guest chapter 24 . 5/21/2015
Honestly people with kids are so unappealing like you had a kid from someone else gross like if we have a kid mine will be better but at the same time I would never date a single mom or dad like that's so unattractive ewww. Bella is such a whore she slept with Edward and yeah he left but like who's the slut who opened her legs Bella who's the slut the was married don't act all but hurt when they treat like the trashy whore you are JS
Guest chapter 13 . 5/21/2015
Wow authors that use extremes for reviews and reads but that's why you won't get past 500 reviews with that tactic your story sucks
NanStew chapter 39 . 5/21/2015
Very nice story. I enjoyed it immensely.
NanStew chapter 24 . 5/19/2015
He never should have dumped her in the first place, is my opinion!
NanStew chapter 23 . 5/19/2015
Edward is still an ass. Grrrrrr.
NanStew chapter 22 . 5/19/2015
Edward would drive me crazy!
NanStew chapter 21 . 5/19/2015
Your title is in error. It should be "The One Who Ran Away"!
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