Reviews for Wings Of Fire
V-rcingetorix chapter 44 . 1/21/2017
Um, just a note, but water is already levo/dextro. The filtration process would be just removing chiral plant life from the water ... which should be done anyway. Sanitation is a *must* for drinking/washing water.

Sorry to interrupt, please continue!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/8/2015
You need to totally publish a book dude! Thatd be awesome.
Guest chapter 47 . 7/2/2015
Well done, being a fellow Talimancer, I definitely enjoyed this story, hope to see more.
Agastopia chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
Holy hell i have only read the first bloody paagraph and already i want to read more. Damn dis shit is gud
Jacob Morgan chapter 47 . 4/2/2015
Bioware should have hired you for a mass effect 3 movie as of shepherd's choices and the end brought a tear to my eye(anyone who wants to hate on me for sissy or something go right ahead I won't bloody respond) good day or eavining to all of you. Eat A Dick Bioware this guy gave meaning to your shit endings
Geezuz chapter 46 . 2/20/2015
The best damn ending one could ask for
Palaven Blues chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
Your mShali is so freakin cute
Joryn282 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Alright, nice, brief little prologue here that starts off where the third game ended. I like that better than going through the final moments like some people may do. At least Shepard appears to be in good humor. About the only thing I could add to it is if he were to think about his friends. Are they okay? Stuff like that. Other than that it seemed fairly realistic. On Hackett's part, having him order everyone to stay away from the Reaper corpses seem like a good call so good addition there. I see you chose the destroy ending. Poor geth. Not much else to say on this chapter since it was fairly short. Everything read well. No errors that I could see as I read it. All in all good stuff. I look forward to reading more.
Palaven Blues chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
Hahahaha, Garrus would be such a player.

two more weeks?!

Yes, I'm sure Tali has quite the giggle ...
Palaven Blues chapter 9 . 6/3/2014
god, it's so weird to hear Shepard calling someone "Mom."
Palaven Blues chapter 8 . 6/3/2014
Lol, Admiral Cutie, reporting for duty.

"What was Admiral Xen even for"

man, quarians' quariacentrism really gets on my nerves, sometimes :P
Palaven Blues chapter 7 . 6/3/2014
pffft, "lowly marine to cough ..." Your Shep is hilarious.

Grunt is so cute!

NUUUUUUUUUUUU, not the geth and EDI!
Palaven Blues chapter 6 . 6/3/2014
Awww, Tali. So cute right now, trying to talk to him.

And Kasumi, lol. She so goofy.

and YAY! Finally back together. :D
Palaven Blues chapter 5 . 5/6/2014
huh, I thought somehow the Citadel crashed on Earth ...

poor Tali. She needs some rest, I think.

aaaaah! MY Jack. I lovens her.
Palaven Blues chapter 4 . 5/6/2014
omg, Joker. Late for your own party, priceless.

awww, Garrus doesn't like being a hero?

Oh, that giant fucking clock. XD
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