Reviews for The Choices We Make
metal.fan04 chapter 22 . 8/9/2013
This is a great story and I hope that you will be posting more soon! I hope that all is well with you and yours! Hope to see some new chapters soon! :)
jav5683 chapter 22 . 8/1/2013
how come when Emmett and Jasper break down the door they did not see Jessica.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
The characters continue to be most stupid people created in fanfic, and that's really saying something. Why would Jasper and Emmett simply let the culprits stand there and get away with it? Emmett watched someone run out of the door of the room Edward was in, without a thought of chasing after the person or alerting others, then Jasper walked out while effectively receiving a confession from one of Jessica's friends. Again - why not alert others, so they can be detained and Edward's drink can be salvaged for authorities? Also, on a related note, even the EMTs are stupid - in the real world, if they came into party with underage drinking, and someone obviously overdosed on something, the EMTs definitely would notify the police.
slippery chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
That was great! Can't wait to see whats next. Hope you feel better.
cloemarrie chapter 22 . 7/29/2013
Wow that was harsh! Sorry I haven't left comments on all the chapters I read most of this glorious amazing story on my cell and it's a bit hard to comment on every chap from it lol and just finished up to this chapter of the story! I've been hooked from the beginning.

Charlie and his girlfriend are horrible...Renee...I don't even have words to describe them horrible people!

Poor Bella...dickward got what was coming to him! How dare him to say she didn't have the right to be pissed when she had EVERY right to be! He's the one who didn't have the right to be!

I haven't had a good cry in a very long time...this is a tear jerker especially the chapter of them almost loosing the baby! That one was a bit harder to read...but glad Edward and the Cullens stuck by her.

NOOOOOOOO! I want to read more! Nice cliffe! Wonder how Edward's doing?!
Della291 chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
aRGGHH - Really wish that J would have let Em bust down that other door so that the bitch was caught! Bella is going to be PISSED that he even went to the party and THEN to fuck even though he didn't do it on his own - but his dick still got hard! ARRGHHH
Pates Greeneyes chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
Those f'ing whores!
I cannot believe that they did this! Why wa it to accomplish? Jessica sleeping with Edward just to upset him and Bella?

I hope to hell jasper gets a hold of them!

I hope you are doing well!
CassandraLowery chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
Wow...just...wow.

Words aren't enough.

Thanks for writing and posting for us despite your vertigo issues-you rock, girl! I'm a homeschooling mom of four and have been diagnosed with about five autoimmune disorders, so I know how difficult it is to concentrate, write, and even think (not to mention caring for your kids!) when the world keeps spinnin' and pain keeps callin'. You're a gem to give us a chapter, and I hope you had a delightful birthday!

I pray for you to get to see the specialist(s) needed for a diagnosis and effective treatment. Take care, and hang in there, sweetie!

Much love,
Cassandra :)
xxxooo
jule2 chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
Let's just hope he is ok.
Kgunter34 chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
The crazy bitch prolly filmed it. Great update.
pnkats chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
I hope jasper lets them all have it!
izlovezvampires chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
Excellent chapter. Seemed short but very good. Got your desired effect, I think.

Love this story and more to come soon.

Sending you well wishes.
debslmac chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
Bitches! I hope they get ALL they deserve!
cloemarrie chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
Hey Art! It's past 2 am so I gotta get to bed but so far I LOVE this one as usual! So did they or didn't they use protection? hmmm...well I'll see when I read on :)

I'm going to see my mom she's in the hospital. I won't be back until Monday so...I won't be able to read on till I get home but I will continue.

I LOVE this one keep up the fantastic work hon!

Mags
Mom23xx chapter 22 . 7/27/2013
Oh shit...will this help Bella come around a bit? And that bitch Jessica better watch her back!
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