Reviews for The Outsiders
Guest chapter 2 . 6/4/2014
Please please please continue!
The Shadows in the Dark chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
I love it, please continue writing
AvidMovieFan16 chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
Awesome action! Please continue.
beyblade fan 14 chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
You did a good job with this chapter keep up the good work.
beyblade fan 14 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
You did a Nice job on this story keep up the good work,your a very talented author.:D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Hey it's me again I'm the one who was a thumbs down on the storyline and said the spelling SUCKS! Yeah so one more thing you are definitely more of a see than feel author. You give the facts very plainly. If I wrote this I would say Ponyboy is the heart of the gang. Nobody has the depth he does. He feels so violently for hope. He hopes his life will get better. This boy who you see with mocha brown hair and green eyes isn't just a person, he's the greatest story you'll ever read-that's how I would say it
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Your story was ok, but it was messy and the girls make it terrible. Next time keep the same characters or add ONE girl. Your spelling SUCKS and so does your grammar, but bad grammar makes it sound greasy. Talk about ponyboy more. He should be the main character anyway. Make it sound like the gang gets all the girls because if they look like the movie they are all sexy! Yeah the storyline kinda gets a thumbs down but it's ok. I have ideas if you want some. I'm writing a story too! Thanks...
HollyKaySmith chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Love it! update soon please! :)