I can't imagine the words 'teamwork' between kiba naru and Saku. Really should've sent them back Kakashi...

Ch3 proves just how much of a necessity edgy!Sasuke is to Naruto and Konoha. Bravo!

Quite well done, a pity it was abandoned.
Also, I'd say 'or Uchiha Sasuke and Rational Thinking' would sum it well. ;)
May also say that this predicts a general loss of competence we now see around us in real life...

Noooooo! I wanted Kakashi to be his teacher

I know you haven't updated in years, but I'd like to say Kiba is the true hero of this story what a brave boy who didn't deserve nothin'

Please update soon!
Love this story

I was so curious!

Poor Sasuke. I can see how the constant sucking-up would get annoying.

I love the ripples in this story. Someone actually decided to do something and all of a sudden they need to see how deep the rabbit hole goes.

choza is too badass

i'm kinda proud of kiba? i mean, yea, he didn't flee when kakashi told them to, but he's the reason sakura and naruto survived.

and i like how you don't protray him as the arrogant, reckless, and annoying kiba that most fanfiction writers do. you portray him as someone loud, but can be reliable and cares about his teammates a lot, like in canon

i really like the fact that danzo was caught, just because sasuke told koharu and homura that he didn't want to have useless teammates

butterfly effect, fuckers

Looking pretty great!

I like the story in a way, but at the same time I just can't keep reading when everything is going wrong and nothing right. Sometimes I can handle doom and gloom, but there just isn't anything to soften the blow for me. I can easily see your logic and i think it is kinda cool how you characterized Hiruzen and your reveal of Konoha's incompetence, traitors, etc. but at the same time I like Naruto, the Sandaime, and Konoha in general and I just can't keep reading when I'm not seeing any light at the end of the tunnel. Good luck with your story.

ohh damn... I have to say that this is one of the most crude and well-written fic I've seen. Anyway I'm impressed and even would say that is nearly as good as a novel. You have changed the future of many characters without the destruction of the main story in the meantime. I'm looking for your next update. Good luck.