|Reviews for A Family Affair|
| coda.baillie chapter 14 . 10/4/2012
I loved your story, it was wel thought out. The details were amazing! I loved how you portrayed the wedding. This story made me smile, giggle and I honestly couldn't hope to find a better story.
I am interested to see if you make a story where Shepard and Garrus adopt. That would be awesome. I can already picture the kind of parents they would be.
| Emmalyn chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
Okay, so I was trying to wait until I finished this to comment, because I usually hate taking a break in a great fic to type a review, but omg. I laughed out loud at the geth's "get well" note. Like, "We are glad that you are not yet dead." Pfft-! So cute! XD
| Catler chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
I was pleased to see the quality of your writing in this chapter was just as good as in the first. That last line almost made me tear up.
| Catler chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
After reading Homeworlds issue 3 this was just what I was looking for. When I finished, I apprehensively clicked the chapter list button to see how much more there was, and was delighted to find 13 more entries. Really looking forward to reading all of them!
| Lots-of-Little-Pink-Clouds chapter 14 . 8/5/2012
That was so cute! :)
| Niamh St. George chapter 13 . 7/31/2012
Finally finished! I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this, and how much I enjoyed - in particular - the... the *happy* of it. After the events of the game, it was nice to read something that had a much more relaxed pace that was a whole lot less life-or-death. In particular I loved your take on Solana, and wouldn't mind knowing how a conversation between her and James might've gone. I'd hoped Livia would come around, but sadly was unsurprised she didn't. I truly enjoyed your take on Garrus' family, and really loved the vision you gave us of its inner workings. Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)
| XxDreamWalker chapter 13 . 7/27/2012
*Starts to tear up*
Why does this have to end?
I loved it
| TGee chapter 13 . 7/25/2012
I loved every minute of this! Thank you.
| Candle in the Night chapter 13 . 7/25/2012
This was a really nice story, well done.
It was good to see most of the crew, a shame there was no interaction between Shep and Wrex but hey ho. I was genuinely sad at the mention of the dead, but that's a testament to your good writing style. It was touching.
| Rokubi chapter 13 . 7/25/2012
I really enjoyed this, from start to finish. Great job! .
| CyanB chapter 13 . 7/25/2012
This is a good ending, closure but with with enough left open to spawn more stories.
| Candle in the Night chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
I'm glad you let her join, reading this, I think Shepard needs this, not just for herslef, but also for the good of the story. I'm already looking foward to the scrum of old friends in the reception!
| C. Dawgz chapter 12 . 7/23/2012
I like it. I like it a lot. You do a really good job with Garrus' family, and your dialogue between Shepard and Garrus has a lot of pop to it.
| CyanB chapter 12 . 7/23/2012
Ta-da indeed! Simple and powerful.
| The Third Biker Scholar chapter 11 . 7/21/2012
awesome story! i can't wait to read more!