good story

Ok, so this review is more than a decade after the story was written but still thought I'd give a review.

I really like the idea and some of the subterfuge and suspense, but I sort of don't think a story was really told. Or at least, it was the start of story, but the last part of the middle and the ending are missing. I don't honestly know what happened or why DD/Slytherin did what he did with snape and Harry. And what is this "burden" Harry has?

I...I don't really get the ending. Is that Godric there? So he's still alive? What?

I didn't like this. I normally go with the phrase, "If you have nothing nice to say than don't say anything at all" but I can't hold my tongue on this. There was literally no point to this story. I hate it. And I regret reading it. Don't worry you arrogant shit, I'm not going to ask you for a sequel. You shouldn't write anymore is all I'm saying.

Oh! It was very interesting! I liked it!

The headmaster being slytherin was a great twist! I was hoping to see more of the relationship between snape and Harry, but I assume you didn't get around to writing the sequel?

good idea but the fic could be better .

The end? Noo there has to be more. What happens next? Is Hogwarts rebuilt? Is, was, that the real Dumbledore, or is he someplace else being held captive? Is he who shall not be named dead? Inquiring mind need to know!

Fascinating story. Thank you for writing it.

)I made no doubt about him.

Magical, thank you for great story!

Lol. I jumped.

Well, I can quite see why pupils are wary of PM.

- Erm.. Professor...

- Thirty points from Hufflpuff. Yes?

Ok...Intersting. I liked it, though I feel like all was not resolved. I can live with that because everything is not always answered in real life. So, Thanks

who had red hair? thats the big question, isnt it? who is that man back in the chamber of rest I wonder...

somehow its a sad end, we dont know about Tommys end for sure and we just know Hogwarts is destroyed and thats sadly for sure,

but I like that story as confusing as it was at some points... in the end it cleared up xD

Mondy

well um i don't really get the story somehow... dumbledore as heir of slytherin? dumbledore being a enemy in the story? weird... that is unless i misunderstood stuff... but anyway i still enjoyed reading it!

*~Next chapter: The full explanation, and…well, let’s just say that things get a bit more interesting…~*

-O.O MORE interesting? -faints- lol