|Reviews for Unatoned|
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/17
sigh, only because it looks interesting, but i hate stories where all Harry says is, 'this is beyond my skill'
Why do people keep insisting in making him a mediocre wizard at best? 'I never mastered occlumency'? Maybe because he was an undisciplened Little bitch? Now he may, fuck he must, he is a fucking auror, anyone with decent skills can enter his mind and take vital infrmation.
| NuitTombee chapter 8 . 2/4
You're version of the Greengrass sister's are really giving me a Therese/Jeanette* vibe. Quite fitting in my opinion.
| hitori.no.boku chapter 1 . 1/5
I'm only on the first chapter, but I must say I am intrigued by this story. Your writing style reminds me of Raymond Chandler (if you are familiar with him) the American mystery writer. Very nice, I love it.
| ShokAndAwe chapter 23 . 12/26/2013
Once again I'm very impressed. You have a lot of talent for plot and descriptions. This story was excellent, with a twisted and screwed up plot that kept me guessing till the very end. On par with some of the really good mystery novels I've read.
I think you sometimes lingered a little too long on the descriptions but that was the only negative point I could think of.
I expected a romance at the end of the story but this was infinitely better and completely original. I haven't even read a fanfiction yet, where the 'romance' doesn't end well. Very, very good job.
Thanks for writing!
| Granguer chapter 23 . 12/21/2013
Did you write this fanfiction to make us lose faith in humanity ? :(
Just kidding... (?) This was well written and I had to finish it no matter how depressing.
| narutoDkurosaki chapter 23 . 12/21/2013
Dude this was seriously an insane and well written fic sure it was different than the other harry and Daphne fics where Daphne is a cold hearted bitch and not a typical tsundere where authors do not even write her character as well as you do but seriously dude this fic of yours had kept me on my toes at all times I had read this in one go and found it in DLP and harry and daphne' s character was very similar to Sherlock and Irene Adler from the books but still while your story was different from others it still had the happily ever after ending but more in a twisted sort of way and the fight scene the second one was similar to intoxication another HPDG fanfic but Daphne dies in it but you had harry lose nice well written as ever than the other HP fics on this site I just have to read other fics by you
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 18 . 12/1/2013
The endgame arrive'th!
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 17 . 12/1/2013
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 16 . 12/1/2013
I think I have a few pieces of it, but certainly not enough to make a picture.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 15 . 12/1/2013
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 14 . 12/1/2013
Excellent work, as usual.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 13 . 12/1/2013
I think speculating at this point would be a bad job.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 12 . 12/1/2013
Hook, line and sinker.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
Impressive amount of cynicism in this chapter, giving a good look at where the world has gone following Voldemort's defeat. Not very far, judging by this small slice.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 10 . 12/1/2013
I share Harry's concerns: I'm viewing every action with a critical, cynical eye. Even the idiotic stuff, which is so random that no one could possibly have ever planned it...did Daphne?