|Reviews for Unatoned|
| Rebel Sympathizer chapter 23 . 2/13/2015
Wow. That was a nice ending, although I feel sorry for Auror Williamson - even if he was an asshole. Anyway, I wish the ending was longer - I really liked the world you created (even when I can't ignore that a few HP characters are missing, almost like they didn't exist). I generally don't like DG/HP as I generally don't like Daphne 'The Beautiful And Deadly Ice Queen' Greengrass and I was reluctant to start reading your story... Seems silly now, especially since I LOVE your Daphne. Well, I love all of your characters and I love the first person narrator, the game Daphne and Harry played, the action, the bitter world, the mystery. Really, I enjoyed your story. I wish you'd write another one with your Daphne.
Anyway, keep up the good job!
| DonKilla chapter 23 . 1/22/2015
...Damn she cold
| Cat Beats chapter 23 . 1/6/2015
Damn, this story has thoroughly captivated me for the past couple of hours. It has a sick fascination to it that is hard to find. Unlike unbelievable plots were everyone is evil or bad bad, this has a realistic view of the grey in between.
| ff vvortic chapter 23 . 12/24/2014
if I could write like this I wouldn't be stuck in bronze elo hell with noobs my ap support Lee song mechanics are challenjour top kek if only noobs could grammar and spelling and plot gg wp rito thanks matchmaking
| Ecthelion3 chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
This was so outrageously good. One of the top 3 fanfics I have ever read.. Not sure what else to say that others haven't either here or at DLP, but your writing is phenomenal and I've read fanfiction for many years and have only left 4 or 5 reviews if this says anything. Hope to see you come back to fanfiction!
| disarranged chapter 23 . 11/22/2014
No words left to describe the feeling you gave me with this story. No matter how I look at it, you made me think at least one week now remembering extracts of it. There's so much truth, realism and seriousness in it that piece of work that my mind is still in the process of progressing into the deeper sense of it. You described in an incredible way how life really plays (for some of us, including me) and left me kind of restless. Like you maybe noticed I am not just deeply impressed, but I want to thank you in every way that matters for this story. It is somehow the first one of over hundred that made me feel statisfied in every meaning.
| fleurwithme chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
This story was quite the ride. If you're on the hedge about whether or not to pick up this story and you're reading this review, do it. Do it now. This really is the best (if not only) HP noir I have seen.
What is the truth, what are the lies? This story will spin its tale that you won't know which are which. Also, there are plenty of red herrings, to keep you guessing.
SPOILER (Well, not really, but it's conjecture about the end, so if you haven't read, don't read!)
Was it AG who married [recall HP's realization in ch22]? Seems to fit as bloodlines would work (plus with the hints of infatuation to MB.)
| benk7673 chapter 23 . 10/1/2014
Thanks for writing such a great story! The plot was well crafted. Have you read the Arsene Lupin novels?
| Mighty Pen 20 chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
Interesting story so far, frighteningly well written. You have done a very good job. Great descriptions and witty dialogues.
That said, a minus in my humble opinion is that while your descriptions are amazing, at some points there are way too many of them, which leaves room to very little action. Same thing seems to happen with Harry' s thoughts sometimes. Well, there is not necessarily something wrong with this style, and it depends on the readers' preferences as to whether they like it or not; personally however, the word moderation comes to mind.
Other than that, as i already said, this reads like a high piece of literature, something that is quite rare on this site. Nice one.
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/16/2014
Really and truly loved the story. I enjoyed the portrayal of a real slytherinesque Daphne most of all though. So many authors forget that she was a slytherin and make her out to be some misplaced ravenclaw. Shame about Astoria though. Kinda felt alittle attachment to her. But again, amazing work. Kudos to you.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
so harry can shrug off the imperius curse but not a drink-something charm? i guess thinking with his penis is good enough reason.
| The Lightning Bandit chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
I read this whole story but didn't have time to review until now. It was an amazing ride. I really really enjoyed the ending. It made the characters feel human and relate able. I wouldn't go to jail for life just so that one bad person also goes to jail. That's just not going to happen. Really enjoyed the hell out of this story. You should be proud of finishing something that was so well put together. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more of your work.
| Reader chapter 23 . 5/30/2014
I can only say one thing about your story: I loved it.
| knarf3 chapter 2 . 5/30/2014
Potter can probably achieve more influence by becoming a rich businessman or something similar if he wants a better shot at affecting change.
| 0Harry.J.Potter0 chapter 11 . 5/15/2014
Great Story, Harry reminds me of Geralt from Witcher series if you know what I'm talking about. Calm, collected and rational.