|Reviews for Unatoned|
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 12 . 12/1/2013
Hook, line and sinker.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
Impressive amount of cynicism in this chapter, giving a good look at where the world has gone following Voldemort's defeat. Not very far, judging by this small slice.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 10 . 12/1/2013
I share Harry's concerns: I'm viewing every action with a critical, cynical eye. Even the idiotic stuff, which is so random that no one could possibly have ever planned it...did Daphne?
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 9 . 12/1/2013
After the trouble with Dementors during DH, I'm surprised they're still tolerated. Though if you're following canon, there is no clear way to be rid of them.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
Well done sir.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 7 . 12/1/2013
And things just get worse...
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
I am ensnared. Farewell, afternoon.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 5 . 12/1/2013
Although I was surprised with the ease that Harry found Daphne's chambers, perhaps I shouldn't haven been. There is probably very little the Greengrasses reveals that they don't want seen.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
Harry, you poor bastard, you never had a chance.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
I am struck by how very different this feels from any other HP fan-fiction story I've read. The investigation, the details, the questionable motivations...well done.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
I enjoy Harry's apparent motivations for pursuing this case. It's a choice most people who were career oriented would not make. But Harry, being someone who's stood up to wrongdoing his entire life, no matter what the cost...it's perfectly in character.
| Voice of the Nephilim chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
An intriguing start. I'm not familiar with the noir source material, but it effectively sets up a family with serious dysfunctional issues.
I found a few typos throughout the piece, but the oddest part was Sterling's tendency to add 'man' onto the end of a few sentences. Maybe I'm unfamiliar with British dialects, but from an American perspective it seems like an exceedingly odd choice.
Regardless, I enjoyed it, and will read more.
| AnAddictedReader chapter 23 . 10/13/2013
Damn, this was such a great story. I love the realistic ending.
| AnAddictedReader chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
So far, I'm finding myself being sucked into the story, which is a great compliment for an author.
| Dean Pagliaro chapter 23 . 9/8/2013
This was one of the high quality fan fiction stories I have ever read. Thank you for the time and effort you put into this work of art.