Reviews for Back With Jack
LadyAnnabethHermioneToriRide chapter 11 . 1/12/2014
So sad yet so perfect!
Naire chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
Ok, that was the worst ending ever : But I liked the fic anyway. Thought it would turn out differently when Jack found out about the Doctor's destiny... And Jack was too OOC, crying and jumping off the building, seriously?
All in all I enjoyed reading it but it left me a little dissapointed. Well, can't make everyone happy, I guess.
Lavonya chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Kanigye chapter 11 . 6/15/2013
I really enjoyed this. It's very well written :)
The end made me sad. I'm a sucker for the major fluffy endings. I understand why you ended it that way though.
This is definitely one of my favorite fics I've read in a while.
Great job c:
forgotmypassword chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
Waited to read the whole story before reviewing.
I don't really read Jack/Eleven fiction because (at least in my opinion) it is never portrayed realistically.
This story was great! You kept Jack flirty and Eleven awkward. You are fantastic and I love you. The only part that was off, to me, was when Jack let Eleven eat that pastry. I really think that Jack would have wanted Eleven to completely recuperate his feelings, without being under the influence of anything.
I was a bit apprehensive about the ending, but I shouldn't have been worried, you're a great writer (:
I love that there was no great big happy ending where they flew around the universe together, but I was sort of sad that Jack was never in love with the Doctor.
Never stop!
NinchillaHunter2012 chapter 10 . 2/4/2013
Great Job! This chapter actually made me cry. I tear up reading stories occasionally but only a few have made me cry. So congrats! This chapter is really fantastic! The whole story for that matter! Keep up the fantastic writing!
JesskaEspy chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
I dont see what you were initially worried about, your story is amazing!
I REALLY like it!
Kaadajin chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Oh noes, Jack is going to die!...
xD ok why the hell is he doing that, like it'll help? Wtf are you thinking about, Jack, the Doctor iS IN YOUR BED GODDAMIT. WELL, WAS. THANKS YO YOU. Jeez, men!
Kaadajin chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Ha finally, what I've been looking for! Jack/Eleven! I'm going to love this...
Ducky chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
For some reason, an image of the Doctor sobbing in the TARDIS immediatedly springs to mind. Fantastic story, but I really don't like this ending! It makes me too sad! :(
Prothrombintime chapter 11 . 10/1/2012
Excellent ending! Too true, 'too much blood on our hands and too much guilt on our conscience' Brilliant. And loved Jack's line as well. Very Jack. Though it saddens me to think about Jack without Ianto, I have to admit that it's a plausible storyline. I think Jack's histrionics and overly emotional state was very true to someone who is in mourning and is trying so hard to find something to fill the void. And nice to think Jack finally had his chance with the Doctor and let that infatuation play out as it should have. Very cleverly done! Bravo.
Prothrombintime chapter 10 . 10/1/2012
Wow, that was... harsh. Poor Jack. But I think the Doctor is right. I don't think that Jack is in love with him. I think Jack loves him, but I also agree that it's an infatuation. But poor Jack. He really does lose everyone that he loves, no matter how he loves them. And it really did bring tears to my eyes that Jack told the Doctor that he loved him because he was unable to say it to Ianto...
Prothrombintime chapter 9 . 10/1/2012
Again I have to wonder just how much his desperate desire to be with the Doctor forever has to do with the Doctor himself... I think Jack is tired of losing people, and he thinks he's found in the Doctor someone he can't lose, though I'm not sure if it's really so much about his feelings for the Doctor... I feel like he has substituted the Doctor, not just for Ianto, but for everyone he's lost in his long lifetime. I also think that the fantasy won't be able to sustain itself... I guess we'll see... *clicks next*
Prothrombintime chapter 8 . 10/1/2012
I really admire your imagination in coming up with new adventures for the two of them. I always feel at a bit of a loss when I have to think up new situations with aliens and other planets and/or time periods. And of course something would have to happen to interrupt their... reindeer games! :-) But again I do see a sort of underlying desperation in Jack, that urge to hold onto something or someone that can't die, or at least, not die as easily as a human. It makes perfect sense after what he lost and how.
Prothrombintime chapter 7 . 9/30/2012
Love that Jack took the Doctor to an erotic show. And his reaction was perfectly in character. Love the 'confusing things in weird places' line. :-) And I laughed aloud and 'tuck yourself in'! But on a more serious note, I can't help feeling that Jack's insistence that they can be together forever is more deeply rooted in having lost Ianto that he's willing to admit. There's a lot more going on under the surface here, I think...
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