|Reviews for In it for 50|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/8/2014
| Mischief101 chapter 3 . 8/12/2013
How is this complete? I mean really?
| Hazmatt chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Great story! Poor Derek!
| Honoria York chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
My bad lol computer error. Story was good, rather enjoyable.
| Honoria York chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Why is this considered completed when its not?
| CatzzCK chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
continue pleaseee! Im loving this
| Sorceress of Magic chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
| Juice995 chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
| cytheria-03 chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Keep them coming. Loved it.
| kmr04 chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
SO glad to see an update. Add more please, this was good and I look forward to reading more.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Oh poor Derek when he revealed to Casey what had happened with Rebecca.
I really liked how Casey gave her pep talk which led to their kiss.
Was this definitely a 3-part story? If so, it was a great way to tie the night off for them and if no, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Juice95 chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
This is absolutely amazing.
| MayMarie chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
You do a very good job of setting the scene and leaving just enough for the reader to get an idea of what is going on while leaving enough mystery to reveal later. And a very good job at using Casey's inner monologue to keep things moving.
But I'm wondering why you are censoring the swearing in this chapter? If your characters are going to swear, use the real words. Otherwise you should find another way to phrase their lines.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
aww, post soon it is so cute!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
I can't help thinking this newlywed game is foreshadowing something. :}