|Reviews for Canadian Slave|
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/14
when i posted the sopa thing on your other page it was an accident sorry :/ Also, I FREAKIN LOVE YOUR STORIES! THERE SO FABULOUS! I hope you post new ones soon -
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/14
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| Reviewer chapter 13 . 2/25
First of all, you need to fix your spelling and grammar. It's atrocious and has only gotten worse since the beginning of your story. The characters are satisfactory, though you played the "Why am I so worried about him? Am I in love?" card way too early. Prussia seems absolutely uncaring and possessive of Canada, while Canada's just sad, depressive, and haunted all the time. All other characters just lack depth and are absolutely flat and unchanging. The plot makes very little sense as well. Tell me, why would Gilbert need to carry out that whole rescue operation when he apparently owns Matthew? Because your plot doesn't make sense, that's why. "...it almost felt like there was a child growing inside him." Way too obvious, uninteresting, and overall just bland. The "mafia" spin is irrelevant and barely belongs, it plays no important part of the story and is nothing but random "mafia leaders" from different countries gathering in hotel rooms to think about themselves. This story, though with an interesting premise, makes little to no sense and need major fixing in the logic, grammar, and spelling departments.
Also, I'm going to have to call bullshit on your profile. You know all the words to those languages but can't speak a single one? Please. That sounds like an excuse for saying that you're very knowledgeable, and when someone tries to call you out on it you're free to say that "I only know the words and not the structure of the language". Even your little insert of Russian at the beginning of Chapter 7 was straight from Google translate and was incorrect. Of course, if you were actually fluent you'd know that.
My advice to you would be to bring some sense to the story, update more, get yourself someone that understands that "sergeant mother" is not equivalent to "surrogate mother" to fix your mistakes, and stop making things up about yourself to seem smarter.
| UrfavoriteNepeta chapter 13 . 2/4
Oooooh Nep likey ;33 That's the CUTEST M rate I've ever read.
I want to know if you have a Tumblr cause I really want to follow you :33 I'm Pepsicola9000 for the sexy awesome Homestuck ship and the over nine thousand joke :33
| Themidnightvampress chapter 6 . 1/19
What manga did you read? I read a lot of manga and never seen that word in one of them? I'm interested.
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/4
Hurrrryy n write morreeee
| killerkitty15 chapter 13 . 1/4
*takes out tire iron* IF YOU DO NOT UPDATE QUICKLY YOU WILL PAY!
*suddenly gets teary eyed* i-im sorry *throws tire iron over shoulder* I DIDNT MEAN IT! I LOVE YOU! ALL I ASK IS THAT YOU UPDATE QUICKLY *gets down on one knee* *pulls out blue ring pop* ...i love you...please...will you update for me?
| rosemoon1999 chapter 13 . 1/2
ERMAGAWD YOU UPDATED MY LIFE IS COMPLETE I LOVE YOU WILL YOU MARRY ME WE CAN BE PHANTOMMOON OR PHANTOMROSE OR ANYTHING YOU LIKE BETTER!? (Yes, that was all originally one gigantic, non-spaced mess.)
Anyways, I adore this story. I CANNOT stress how much I love the original concept and the way you portray the characters. And the rest of the chapters will be up in the next week?
*Dead silence while processing*
OH HELL YEAH! *Starts dancing/spazzing out, screaming at the top of my lungs* *Breaks a window* *Looks at the glass*
Sigh... Look what you made me do. Well, I guess I must bid thee farewell while I clean this up. Until next time,
| kara-hime24 chapter 13 . 1/2
your alive :D
| Lily Lewis chapter 12 . 1/1
Oh, awesome And I checked out your profile... *is in awe* that's a lotta languages, honey. But it's nice you actually speak Russian since you use it in some of your stories (even though it's obviously not their fault it still annoys me when authors get the grammar wrong) and I haven't spotted a mistake yet :) (BTW, reviewing this chapter since FFN is being mean and not letting me do it on 13)
| toastergal chapter 13 . 1/1
Yay! Thanks you for the update. I was going crazy waiting.
I can't wait to see what's next. (Although I'll be sad if my thought is right and the kids are Alfred's, I kind of want them to be Gilbert's)
| artistreilly421 chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
I love this story so much! I've laughed & cried in this so much ... I can't wait for the next chapter ! o(o)o
| iamazoroark chapter 13 . 12/14/2013
So it's been a while since you updated this, and I know you said this was going on hiatus but I just wanted to ask you, Have you given up on this?
I'm honestly not being rude, or trying not to be, but I like your writing although you say things like 'Matthew yawned and fell asleep', for an example, often.
It may help to vary your writing a bit when describing falling asleep.
If it is possible would you maybe pm me your response?
Xxx and sorry,
(I found recently my name is the same as how Prussia refers to Canada in fanfictions!)
| KoHime in the Kingdom of Light chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
Aww darn. I hate Mpreg so I don't think I can continue reading this :P good story, as far as ive read at least. Happy writing!
| Become one yes chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
I've never done a reveiw but... Can you make Gil and Matt hve sexual and then if twins win make one Al's and the others Gil's