Reviews for Sweet Sweet Revenge
monkeysheep chapter 5 . 5/19
sorry to say but i liked it
Guest chapter 5 . 12/11/2014
Why the fuck you even write thease whackkkkkk(vomit) type of fiction? It doesn't make you popular but lower.
cookie chapter 5 . 5/30/2014
I feel as if though you should add more depth to your characters. I know that this is a fanfiction and all, but you should still describe the characters and their personalities. It makes people more attached to the characters and feel more when they are hurt or die. I honestly felt nothing when Tensa died in your fix and was actually kind of boeed. Jusr use more adjectives and you will be good on depth. Also, please try to make it seem like you are not rushing your stories. This plot had potential to be put onto a longer story but length does not really matter. It is the end that matters. A rushed story is alright, nut no one wants to read a story all the way through for a rushed end.
Haneko Takahashi chapter 5 . 3/9/2014
omg...those deaths were...intense...loved Inoue's though. annoying lil shit with nice tits...
OptionalPrincess chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
Awwwwwww that was so sad, but a very good story :)
Daughter-of-the-Old chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
I just wish that Tensa didn't have to die,other than that it was great.
Daughter-of-the-Old chapter 2 . 10/17/2013
Wait,so is Ichigo partially insane then? Great story by the way.
holly-chan13 chapter 5 . 3/18/2013
soo...depressing. I honestly feel like crying right now. Good fic though. Keep writing!
holly-chan13 chapter 4 . 3/18/2013
Tensa is soo cute! I love him and this story!:)
Rose-MaxareBadass chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
You made me cry...I always say no I'm not reading this because its sad, and then it's so good I get drawn in and then I cry, I have tears in my eyes as I write this, literally
Bleach5252 chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
Awww that was just...sad...but good...but still sad...
blackblooddoomwolf chapter 5 . 10/18/2012
Well...didn't expect that to happen poor Tensa :(
blackblooddoomwolf chapter 3 . 10/18/2012
Hi normally I would review at the end of a story but I guess this as good a time as any to tell you I really love your story it's very original and Grimm as a kitty is just to cute
XxItalyangelxx chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
It was a sad ending but I'm happy no one committed suicide
JanusTheUnlucky7 chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
Wow, the ending seemed pretty rushed to me. You've could have kept this going if you really wanted to. Btw, Mpreg?!
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