Reviews for I want you
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
It feels very amateur the story doesn't have a as good of flow as it could have you should focus on your diction
Sarah-Sage chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
That was pretty awesome! One tiny question though what was she going to tell him before he started in on yelling at her?
Nyimphadora chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Very nice ! *.* The last sentence made a little choc ;)
Lanaholic chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
I hardly imagine Daryl beeing a virgin for that long but then again... who cares (really? )
You did a good job, well done! *takes a deep breath*
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
This was beautiful. :3 I hope to see more of your work for CARYL
itsi3 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Nice job!
Crystal
SuperAwesomePandaKitty chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Thought it was great _
Me chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
'Daryl Dixon isn't a virgin anymore.' *gasp* TWIST ENDING. :O I salute you. Continue fanfictions for them, you kill it.
I want you. To keep writing. -Did you see what I did there?- ;D
LopezG chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
What happened to chapter 2?
superfelix chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
His thoughts suddenly flashed to Carol and he almost stopped.
"What the hell?"...hahaha.
superfelix chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
"What do you want Daryl? She asked quietly, still not facing him.
Daryl stopped, his heart beating hard in his chest. "You." He breathed...awww, cute.
Heather Scott chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
good! but carol was not herself. if this happened in an episode *prays to god* she would be more timid instead of blowing him asap! lmao but other than that. fantastic!
deelove1 chapter 2 . 7/1/2012
Please post more soon:)
Mrs.NormanReedus chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Cute :)
LopezG chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Nice and smutty. I really enjoyed both chapters. But I think I liked the first one better.
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