|Reviews for Premature Grief|
| moms5thchild chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Short, specific and very, very good. Sometimes the shorter the fiction means the harder it is to write.
| mmkbrook chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This would be a great opener for season 10. Would like to see return of Eli and Malachai. Liat they can leave at home-she is a witch. In the end he thought like a father, so maybe there is hope for him yet.
| cailinbeag chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Great story! Great interpretation of Liat!
| ajc03 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Very good writing. I really liked your story and how you capture Eli David's feelings. It could actually happened in the show. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I really liked this, I can imagine this happening in the season 10 opening. It was pretty epic. Good job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Not bad - I had imaginged Eli monotoring the news feed from ZNN but not seeing her carried out of the building. A little bit like the season 4 opener with the night club bombing in Morrocco.
| SassyJ chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
| Future Mrs.Malik-Styles chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Good :) but what about Tony?
| Leah339 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Ooh I like this. A lot *-* Thank you for sharing
| tiva kissing in a tree chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I hope this is true and this brings Eli back I love him :D
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I really, really like this story and would like to think Eli David would grieve if Ziva died.
Really good story!
| krg11 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Lovely piece. The emotional tone is just right.
| Angelhaggis chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
WOW! I love this oneshot, it is very well written and you can feel Eli's emotion.
| angelscatie chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Great beginning, I hope. I really like how you captured Eli David's grief on Ziva and the explosion. Keep up the good work.