Reviews for Walk
Judyblue95 chapter 14 . 10/11/2014
when she had that little dizzy spell earlier I had a thought that she might be pregnant but couldn't be that hopeful. I'm ecstatic too, for both of them! Lovely chapter. I'm happy she kneed that pig in the balls!
Judyblue95 chapter 13 . 10/11/2014
holy vampireballs Batman! Laurent goes after Bella! The rest of the chapter was very sweet and a little sexy.
Judyblue95 chapter 12 . 10/11/2014
where is everybody going to sleep? will Jake give up his room so that James and his daughter can stay with Bella? or will Edward's parents stay with Bella? I love that Edward doesn't have a perfect body but that it's perfect for Bella!
Judyblue95 chapter 11 . 10/11/2014
ahhhhhh! that was so very satisfying! I feel like lighting a cigarette and I don't smoke!
Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 10/11/2014
more UST...I feel for Bella...she must be doubting her attractiveness by now...I would be.
Judyblue95 chapter 9 . 10/11/2014
now we're cookin'! i'm happy they're taking their time with this...very nice to savor all that UST...
Judyblue95 chapter 8 . 10/11/2014
well done! I love that he was honest with her about why he acted differently around her when he thought Jake was her BF and not Seth's...
Judyblue95 chapter 7 . 10/11/2014
wonderful chapter. who knew that shopping for bath and kitchen ware could be so sexy and romantic. I wonder why he didn't ask who Seth was...
Judyblue95 chapter 6 . 10/11/2014
love Edward's comment "must be an artist thing" or something like that! He seriously has no gaydar at all, does he? someone will clue him in soon, won't they?
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 10/11/2014
Did I tell you before that I LOVE Jake as a gay artist! It so fits him! We're getting closer, I think to a full on E and Be encounter. At least I hope so...
Judyblue95 chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Maybe Alice can help them understand each other better...I think I'm going to be reading this all day...
Judyblue95 chapter 3 . 10/11/2014
I was surprised and delighted with her POV. I had no idea she was so attracted to him and had been even before she met him! I see where she thought his reaction to her was negative when he was trying to not seem like an old perv. How cute is this misunderstanding of each other they have going on! I'm sure it will boost the UST until it explodes! At least I hope so because I can't WAIT to read all about it...
Judyblue95 chapter 2 . 10/11/2014
I'm grinning at your closing A/N...this was a lovely, easy chapter. Easy in that the relationship between them seems fairly easy so far, despite his initial pricklyness...I'm not opposed to either minimal drama or maximum angst, or anything in between. I read all kinds of stories. I'm getting a good feeling about this one so far.
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Hi there! I'm new to your stories and someone told me to read you, can't remember who, so I picked your newest multi-chapter story. I love that Bella and Edward meet in the first chapter. I like what I've read so far. I'm happy your are a HEA girl. So am I.
Guest chapter 20 . 9/14/2014
Thank you for such a wonderful story, I just loved it!
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