|Reviews for Time and Time Again|
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
Hi Keith, I enjoyed this story. It was something a bit different but it really worked. Lovely ending too. Well done xx
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
Oh wow that was great
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
Brilliantly put together. Fun, creative and totally enjoyable.
| Faggy chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
So that's what happened to the 2010 Aaron!
I ask a question and you answer it in the very next chapter. How obliging of you.
Sweet ending and you managed to wrap it all up nicely.
| Shawnyola chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
Aww, Keith, that was really good, I really enjoyed it and what a great idea! Nice to read something slightly different - our favourite boys but with a hint of sci-fi too!
I can imagine how shocked Jackson was to see his future self in those photos on Aaron's phone, though it's a shame Aaron hadn't thought of showing them to Jackson before. Poor Aaron, no wonder he thinks he's going mad after seeing his double in the mirror! *wails hysterically* it's a sign! Glad Jackson was there to comfort him. Ooh, creepy dream too!
It's nice that Jackson believes Aaron, after all, why would he lie? Spooky that the photos on the phone disappeared and then Aaron saw his double again at the garage! Obviously the other Aaron wasn't going to give up and I liked that Jackson suggested they follow 'him'. So Aaron had a premonition about the time lords?
It's understandable that Aaron had altered time by travelling backwards and that his 2010 self was trapped in a paradox as a result. It must have upset him to learn that he had to return to the future so time could be restored but I liked that they let Jackson remain as he was, without the crash having happened, as they could see just how much he meant to Aaron, so at least Aaron wouldn't be returning to his own time alone.
Loved the ending wih both of them waking up, remembering nothing, except Aaron's Lanzarote dream! Lovely thought of them looking ahead to a happy life together, aww. Really well written, Keith, a nice little story, thanks for writing xxxx.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Fab u lous! If only! What a great idea Keith well done. If you fancy continuing so we can see how Aaron would behave differently that'd b fab too!
| Faggy chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Glad you're continuing with this. I wonder what Jackson will do now he's seen the photo?
Also, what's happened to 2010 Aaron? did he just vanish when 2012 Aaron showed up?
| Shawnyola chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Hi Keith. Well, this is a turn up! What was a lovely little one shot, you've now taken it and ran with it and have turned it into a great, ongoing story! Stiil a great idea but Aaron having the knowledge he does about the future and how things could have worked out, could end up sending him mad! Or, in this case, could seriously freak out someone who's close to him! Either way, it's dangerous knowledge to have.
I can just imagine Aaron waking up and realising that Jackson wasn't there, start to think that he'd dreamt the whole thing! Lucily he hadn't - enter a scantilly clad Jackson! Phwoarrr! I can understand that Aaron just wants to get it off his chest and to tell Jackson but obviously he's sceptical on hearing the story. He just thinks Aaron had a nightmare, which makes more sense and after Jackson's said this, even Aaron starts to have second thoughts about his experience.
I liked that Aaron told Paddy, letting him know that he trusted him by saying he was more like a dad to him but even though Paddy wants to believe Aaron, he's unable to. Loved Jackson's joke about Aaron leaving his phone behind - he does have a habit of doing that! Ohhh, discovering that picture on Aaron's phone really is going to reinforce his story. I can't wait to see what he says to Aaron when he gets back! Really great idea, Keith and this story has a lot of potential! Looking forward to what happens next!xxxx
| Valere001 chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Excellent second chapter. Paddy's reaction was good, he didn't laugh at Aaron but was quite skeptical at his story. The last paragraph was perfect, the last line telling us there is more coming.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
| If I Could chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Ooh Keith, I love this story. You could do so much with it. God only knows what poor Jackson must be thinking after seeing that photo. How horrendous would that be? I know you're updating quickly so please keep the updates coming. Really nice work hun x
| Ministryofchaos chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
oh dear, how is Jackson going to react to this? already cant wait for the next chapter! once again well done on great writing! :)
| Nicster chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Fab u lous! If Only... Great idea Keith absolutely love it. Fab as a one shot but I'd happily read more of Aaron behaving differently.
| Shawnyola chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Aww Keith, that was brilliant! And a fantastic idea! If only though, mate...if only...!
I can just picture the bemused look on Aaron's face upon finding the 'shed' in the woods and I smiled at his annoyance at 'the old man' for not explaining where he was properly. Loved how you wrote 'the old man' and how he eventually realised he was on Earth because of Aaron's behaviour! Great idea of Aaron's to be taken back to 6th October 2010.
I can imagine his shock at seeing Jackson's van outside Dale Head when he got back to the village and an even more of a shock when he saw Jackson alive AND moving! I bet he was so overcome with emotion that all he could do was to hug Jackson like there was no tomorrow and to tell him that he loved him, awww. 'The old man' wasn't a 'crank' after all, eh Aaron?
Some people say that if they had their time again, they'd do things differently - I bet Aaron, now knowing what he knows, will do things VERY differently from now onwards! Some have asked you to continue this and I can see why but I think it works well as a great little one-shot and I love the idea that we can imagine Aaron re-writing his own history. Loved it! Thanks for writing, Keith xxxx.
| CazB chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Such a brilliant idea for a fic. Loved it..thankyou.
| Valere001 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
This is absolutely beautiful and brilliant. What a great idea!
And you're sure you don't want to continue it... just a few more chapters... enough to satisfy everyone's curiosity, including yours?
Thanks! I loved it.