Reviews for Power of Five
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Really good story and writing style, but you kept referring Momo as mom, which was actually quite funny. And how about a sequel on their way of showing it!
MidnightsRose chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Kyaa so adorable I could scream
JelloBear chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Dont leave the story add that write more
andysanime chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Oh goodness... yea you're going to have fun Ryoma XD
DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Love the way this chapter has been writing, I hope the rest of the chapters will be just like this, with great detail.
dragonnia chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
j'en veux encore plus de ces histoires
My Lunatic Crow chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Nice! i wish there was more ot6...
Jessi2094 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I like Ryoma's cool and somewhat carefree attitude in this. Good work with this.
EmeraldRain25 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Things are getting a little hot and spicy in here! Please continue! :)
PurpleSong chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
I keep imagine ALL 5 of them carrying ryoma and can't help but laugh XD
pinaygurl28 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
that...that was funny... Momo became Mom... happened too fast... -twitch-
Astrophel Thracius chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
ummm i feel like it's too fast-paced, i think i felt that coz' i write fast0paced stories too. But i do like it :D maybe a little more on humor but definitely a good one-shot
Seventeenth Shenanigan chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Cute story! I just... My internal Grammar Nazi buuuuurns...

her - here, and no comma after the ?
when I befriended- whom?
Mom. You typed Mom. Please fix it.
enough- , not .
Mom. Again.
'cause, not just cause
changed, not change, and until now implies that it has changed. Has it?
You don't need the already while they're molesting Ryoma (already indicates past tense, whereas you want and seconds later, they were doing the so and so)
get used, not use
when, not with

bunnykim89 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I loved it im hoping to read more ot6 stories i really love this pairing
Kistunefighter12 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Great idea i love it and can't wait to read more of your work. Keep up the good work
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