Reviews for Freedom Costs
Antha1 chapter 20 . 9/29
I guess it's a matter of perspective. Who needs chains when the sea walls you in on all sides?

Does this mean that Airril is going to be king? Or is Merida leaving the kingdom and one of the triplets becomes king? I don't think the other clans would be happy with either arrangement. It seems that clan Macara came, made a mess of everything, and then left it for everyone else to clean up.
aearwen95 chapter 1 . 9/18
Really great story I love it!
Antha1 chapter 3 . 9/17
I don't understand the Macara clan's position here. They're insisting that their son marry someone of whom they disapprove? Do they hate him?

How would they find out about what happened in the first place? I'm pretty sure it wasn't the evening news! Also Scotland isn't a country yet, so how could they be it's laughingstock? Because again, how would anyone find out? There is no radio, TV, or even newspapers. They're rumored to have a rebellious teenager? Shocking!
SharKohen chapter 20 . 2/10
Adrenaline pumping story, with some interesting romance and a snarky OC - good job on this story, and definitely worth the read. Merida needs a tough-ish someone who can keep her grounded, and still argues with her.
ImOfficiallyAwesome chapter 19 . 8/8/2013
ImOfficiallyAwesome chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
so far so good
Xiah-sensei chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
This is amazing! I'm looking forward to the sequel!
LuMezenga chapter 20 . 7/5/2013
Yay! I loved how it wasn't like "they lived happily ever after" (even though I am not against that sort of story) but it promises more...
I simply NEED those one-shots! I'll put an alert to the story then, if you say you'll post here when they're ready.
It's been amazing reading the ONLY DECENT FANFICTION OF BRAVE THAT INCLUDES MERIDA AND ROMANCE. I know because I looked for it. You're amazing, keep that in mind.
LuMezenga chapter 19 . 7/5/2013
His sister, guys! How come he hasn't looked for her?
LuMezenga chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
Yay! Everything is sorted, Merida now will marry, and Airril couldn't be happier! Right?
Unless you chop her foot off. I won't be so happy THEN.
LuMezenga chapter 17 . 7/5/2013
Ugh. This is so exhasperating.
LuMezenga chapter 16 . 7/5/2013
LOL she didn't get the stupid carvings...
Seriously, that's your favorite line? I can't call you crazy since you forbade it, but can I call you weird?
And this chapter was so GAAAAH. I wanna die. I want them to work out so badly :(
We still have four chapters so hopefully...
LuMezenga chapter 15 . 7/5/2013
Okaaaay, she didn't lose her foot, but she lost a lot of skin... That's kind of acceptable, I guess. Pretty realistic. Not many Fanfiction authors are willing to give an injury real proportions. I'm glad you did - it adds that 'something else' to your story. And the fact that its your OC, and not the main character of the movie, who admits the feelings first, also strikes me as a positive (and rather rare) characteristic.
LuMezenga chapter 14 . 7/5/2013
So she does snore! I thought he was making it up to annoy her...
Okay the hot-and-cold sensation could not be an indicator of any good... Just don't make her lose her foot or anything...
LuMezenga chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
Really deep and AWESOME chapter.
I can't wait to see the end of this but I don't want it to end how do I deal with these EMOTIONS
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