Reviews for Freedom Costs
SharKohen chapter 20 . 2/10
Adrenaline pumping story, with some interesting romance and a snarky OC - good job on this story, and definitely worth the read. Merida needs a tough-ish someone who can keep her grounded, and still argues with her.
ImOfficiallyAwesome chapter 19 . 8/8/2013
IM BEGGING YOU... MAKE THE SEQUEL!
ImOfficiallyAwesome chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
so far so good
Xiah-sensei chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
This is amazing! I'm looking forward to the sequel!
LuMezenga chapter 20 . 7/5/2013
Yay! I loved how it wasn't like "they lived happily ever after" (even though I am not against that sort of story) but it promises more...
I simply NEED those one-shots! I'll put an alert to the story then, if you say you'll post here when they're ready.
It's been amazing reading the ONLY DECENT FANFICTION OF BRAVE THAT INCLUDES MERIDA AND ROMANCE. I know because I looked for it. You're amazing, keep that in mind.
Peace!
-LuMezenga
LuMezenga chapter 19 . 7/5/2013
His sister, guys! How come he hasn't looked for her?
LuMezenga chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
Yay! Everything is sorted, Merida now will marry, and Airril couldn't be happier! Right?
Unless you chop her foot off. I won't be so happy THEN.
LuMezenga chapter 17 . 7/5/2013
WHICH IDEA MERIDA? CARE TO EXPLAIN?
Ugh. This is so exhasperating.
LuMezenga chapter 16 . 7/5/2013
LOL she didn't get the stupid carvings...
Seriously, that's your favorite line? I can't call you crazy since you forbade it, but can I call you weird?
And this chapter was so GAAAAH. I wanna die. I want them to work out so badly :(
We still have four chapters so hopefully...
LuMezenga chapter 15 . 7/5/2013
Okaaaay, she didn't lose her foot, but she lost a lot of skin... That's kind of acceptable, I guess. Pretty realistic. Not many Fanfiction authors are willing to give an injury real proportions. I'm glad you did - it adds that 'something else' to your story. And the fact that its your OC, and not the main character of the movie, who admits the feelings first, also strikes me as a positive (and rather rare) characteristic.
LuMezenga chapter 14 . 7/5/2013
So she does snore! I thought he was making it up to annoy her...
Okay the hot-and-cold sensation could not be an indicator of any good... Just don't make her lose her foot or anything...
LuMezenga chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
Really deep and AWESOME chapter.
I can't wait to see the end of this but I don't want it to end how do I deal with these EMOTIONS
LuMezenga chapter 12 . 7/5/2013
Kiss him back, Merida! Kiss him back!
LuMezenga chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
Reeeeeally liked the sort of Airril point of view here. Someone has a crush!
One negative thing though: as a proud curly-haired girl, I have to say no to the hair-straighters! Merida looks wild and free with her curls, but sadly I get what you meant - as a sort of literary resource, I suppose. To make your OC see her in a new light. Kind of.
I'm rambling. Kill me now.
LuMezenga chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
Oh wow! So many things happened in this chapter!
Firstly, he knew all along, the bastard! But I get him, I do... I can't hate him for what he did, and even Merida isn't as selfish as she sounds. She would be willing to marry someone for the sake of her people, and that's admirable.
Secondly, he hugged her and I'm all silly smiles and rainbows, when suddenly BAM he kisses her. I think it was just a kind of impulse, because even he seemed a bit surprised afterwards...
Question is, what happens now?
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