this turned out to be a great story. I do hope there will be an update soon.

perf.

Wow! That was awesome.
You manage to write capturing battle scenes and have original ideas for the plot. That is what makes a good story. But you are good at rousing emotion in the reader too and I love that. It's what makes a story great.
So I'm definitely looking forward to chuunin Uzumaki's time as one of the fire guard.
Bye

Cool chapter really liked it

I love your story! My friend read it and told me about and I thought it sounded awesome to I decided to read it. It was totally worth it I fell in love with it. I love how sasuke is loyal to naruto! Man It sucks that they won't be a team for now anyway cause naruto won't abandon them. Please update soon I can't wait!

Ps. Can you recommend me any good naruto time travel fics! I would really appreciate it!

Nice ending there, and I liked how he ripped Danzō. Great as always, please update soon.

Interesting story, not exactly like the standard time travel one. Ironic that it is Sasuke who is the loyal one, and Kakashi who is not (to Naruto, not the village). Then again, I think its a good unique portrayal of the characters.

Errr...so the Hokage is after him now and Kakashi? I knew the 3rd Hokage was an asshole, I just hope Jiraiya continues to be on Naruto's side. Doesn't look like he has a lot of friends in high places anymore.

Great chapter!

So what's going on with the Hokage, does he not trust Naruto or what?

Also, I can't help but wonder if it would not be easier for Naruto to tell the Hokage about the future but then again...the Hokage reminds me of Albus Dumbledore in harry potter.

He would be the type to do what is best for the greater good and miss the individual people like Gaara along the way so I guess I see why Naruto may want to keep this to himself.

Wow, so Naruto's making things happen. Sasuke has the sharingan at last. Hopefully the depressing emo will be a little more thankful to Naruto than be was in the last.

I'm a little worried about Hidan. And i'm wondering if Gaara got out yet, he's one tricky devil.

Sakura still seems like a disappointment, but hopefully she'll get with the program soon.

Thanks for another great chapter!

I wonder how Naruto is going to get the Uchiha nastiness out of Sasuke? I wonder if Sasuke isn't already a little bit crazy from massacre already?

I love this awesome Naruto, but isn't he worried that all this information he's not supposed to know is going to get him in trouble with the Hokage? After all the Hokage is nosy and would want to know how Naruto knows all this stuff that he does right?

I just find Sakura's character bitchy and annoying. It's like a big part of being a ninja is being able to look underneath the underneath and use logic, common sense and conceptual thinking to be able to figure things out. Sakura however smart she may think she is only understands things on one level. If she were a real smart person after all, would have figure out by the very least that Naruto isn't a dobe, by the last day of classes after all.

Great chapter!

Very fun story.

Sounds good so far!

I like how this Naruto is thinking ahead. Hopefully things will go as planned.

This is brilliant! Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!

Exceptionally handled, and you kept true to all their characters while taking this more serious twist of the Naruto universe.
One thing that stands out to me, however, is the way you portrayed Sarutobi. That there is the cherry on top of the cake for me, so to speak. You've gone into the true /Hokage/ - I always knew the old man was a fully-functioning badass and scarily tactical under the kind-grandfather scene, and you've managed to lay it out brilliantly. Hokage for a reason, yeah?

Keep it up, I'm loving it and have little qualms about anything. I hope you write up Itachi with the scale and depth that you did Sarutobi - both deserve it.

Naruto is just asking to be severely punished for this. Exactly how is he going to bring Gaara to Konoha? Last I checked, foreign jinchurikis are not allowed to just waltz into a hidden ninja village.