Reviews for Meat Hook
lastarael chapter 1 . 6/13
Great story! Very well written. I love how you have Sam putting together the pieces even at 10 years old. And how both of Dean and their dad are taking care of him. The lockdown gives John a good reason for going ahead and finishing off the ghost. Yes, I know John is in general kind of a dick sometimes, but it's nice to see him taking care of his sons every once in a while, even if he's the reason Sam is there at 10 in the first place. Very realistic to me. And you nailed all of the emotions that I could see them having.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
I like this, I know I shouldn't but I do
Rebegirl chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
great story. I loved it!
Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Oh wow! I was all set to go to the next chapter, heart in my throat, but it was the end! I was so caught up, I forgot it was a one shot. That's how great it was. So so great in lots of different ways. But what really got me was Sam's revelation about not wanting to hunt. Ahhhh, so heartbreaking.

Yeah, more of the awesome. Congrats! xo
firstcatfish chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
I liked this one. Very little has been done with how Sam and Dean were trained. It felt fresh and unique. I did feel it ended a little abruptly but all loose ends were tied so that was okay. Good job.
shookenuppepsi chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Love it all. Especially love the possibility that Sam is the one who came up with the idea for rocksalt rifles originally.
midknightmist chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
dang. poor sam! thanks for sharing
TS chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Poor Sammy! Ah, that was great. You really have a gift!
ccase13 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
It is a good thing that Dean finally did come up with packing up shotgun shells with salt. Those work so well in the series.
rozzy07 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
..."No," he whispers like he's about to spill his worse sin. "Hunting. I don't want to do this."...

And can you blame the poor boy. Sammy is so damaged here its a miracle he survived further hunts, further pain, further loss of self, before he made his incredibly brave decision to escape and go to Standford. And yikes girl did you put our young but feisty Sammy here through a whole range of pain that his daddy couldn't anticipate or spare him from. Loved your Dean and his willingness to take the hits for his baby brother. Great writing as always.
AlElizabeth chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Good fic. Poor Sammy, yikes! Getting impaled like that would really, really hurt. John and Dean came through though. Keep up the great work!
PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This is

I actually had to wait awhile before reviewing, because I wanted to find the best words to leave behind as a token of my gratitude for sharing this story. I haven't managed to find them. But I do love this story.

I can't imagine growing up in a life like that; and I love the subtle details, like how Dean places Sam between him and his dad. So Dean it's scary.

And especially poignant is the final line: But it turns out this hunt must have scared Dad too, because it's a long time before we take Sammy out on any more hunts.

I've never really thought about John's thought process in training his sons (I'm just now getting in to it, and I haven't "met" John on screen yet in my defense). Honestly, I'm just the slightest bit tiffed that he would raise his sons like that. But you do an excellent job of exploring his own brand of love for his sons in so few words. Bravo! this point I believe I'm simply babbling; probably a combination of too much caffeine and an unhealthy adoration of this story. Tata for now! :)
JaniceC678 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Good job with your first attempt at first person! They're tricky - some work and some don't, but you did a great job, and it's a great hunt story!
Phx chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Nothing like hurt Sam and his protective family so I adored this!
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Terrifyingly good story.
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