|Reviews for Guardian|
| Ani-DP-TT-PJ-H-Ben10 Fan chapter 36 . 9/8
They are so cute this ship is killing me.
| LunarCatNinja chapter 36 . 9/8
Aaaaaaaaw! I'm so glad that Andy and Danny were able to cuddle this chapter!
| RayvnAshes2 chapter 35 . 8/27
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm guessing you update every month or so?
| RayvnAshes2 chapter 34 . 8/27
...Nomi is Alvarro's SISTER?! I so did not see that coming.
Ugh, I want to see the rest of the new Guardians. If Space is following Time, and Time is Clockwork, then my only guess is Jazz, but she's not a ghost...maybe she's Life? Or not a Guardian at all, of course.
You implied that Danny AND Elle weren't supposed to come into their powers early, so Elle is most likely a Guardian, too.
Hm...so many possibilities.
I'm guessing it's too much to hope for Val, Sam, and Tuck to become Guardians as well, so Danny doesn't eventually lose them. Of course they'd have to die first, and there's no guarantee that they would reform in the Ghost Zone/Spirit World...though Danny did wonder if dying too early had something to do with that, given how young Ember, Youngblood, Johnny, and Kitty are...even Andrew is only 22, and I doubt Randy is much older.
| LunarCatNinja chapter 35 . 8/23
I love it! THREE updates! Perfection!
| Dan phantom16 chapter 17 . 8/22
Nnnnnnuuuuuuuu danny died! Btw did I miss something in the TV seares because everyone gives danny the same middle name?
| Kagome51 chapter 32 . 7/28
I've read the previous story and now this one. To be honest, I didn't like the way you portrayed Danny. The way you wrote him seemed childish. But... As time went on I realized it wasn't. You stick close to his personality in the show, which was childish and full of awful puns, but give it a much more mature explanation and a darker reasoning. That's why your stories appeal to me so much. I loved the show, but didn't buy that he didn't understand the danger he was in or the stress it caused. You also made me actually like ghostwriter, a character I had never given a second thought. I love your plot, your ideas are fantastic and I really hope you continue to write Danny exactly as you have him. I couldn't see him any other way.
| SoteiraStar chapter 32 . 7/12
I'm suffering from my usual insomnia and was trolling Tumblr looking at LawLu stuff when I saw you updated and I squealed very happily about this. I loved this chapter and I love how your writing style has improved over the years. I can't wait for the next chappie
| OneDayPineapple chapter 32 . 7/12
| gratsulover117 chapter 31 . 6/22
Love it, wish there was more of danny in this chapter.
Love jazz in this chapter :) especially at the end when she talked to clockwork lair and surprise everyone
| 18-Midori-37 chapter 31 . 6/22
JAZZ I LOVE YOU!
ALSO I TOTALLY WOULD LOVE TO SEE THAT DANNY SCALE FLESHED OUT CUZ OMFG THAT'D BE JUST BRILLIANCE!
AND ALL THE JAZZXCLOCKWORK GOODNESS! AHH! MY HEART! (DO THEY HAVE A SHIP NAME?!)
AND THE BROTHERS WILL BE THE DEATH ME YET! MATH AWESOME!RANDY TO BRAIN SHATTERED! RANDY! EEE~~ AND THEIR BICKERING HGSDGDGFKD!
as for the three portals business...fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck...;-;
hang in there danny, you thought finding the scythe is hard, aren't you goin' to have a great surprise of info when you get back i bet ;-;
| 18-Midori-37 chapter 30 . 6/22
DANNY IM SO FUCKING PROUD OF YOU DSKJGSDGHDGJKDHGSKLADJFGKL!
| gratsulover117 chapter 30 . 6/4
Is it his weapon! ?
Love this and i love from the beginning!
Hope there is more soon and i would love to see more GW and Danny moments _
| mfmerritt chapter 30 . 6/1
You don't realize how I eagerly await every update! I swear I check my email at least 20 times a day hoping see an update. I am now a fan of Iambic Prose, thank you very much. Not a ship I knew I wanted until I found it. I love your Andrew, he's 100% fantastic! Please keep updating.
| 18-Midori-37 chapter 29 . 5/26
these brothers are gonna be the death of me i swear it
aaaAAAaaAAAAaaaAaAand my head still hurts while I'm getting more and more scared over this 'same damn story repeating it self' business imma need an outline with all this guardian info-DAN!?*SCREAMING* NO!