|Reviews for Paper mario : The epic advnture|
| RazorRigs45 chapter 2 . 8/28/2013
hey every body king rigby here and im no longer using this account im now called RazorRigs45 and I have a new story called Margs its featuring gravity falls regular show and the simpsons along with Mario and adventure time
| pepsicola56 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
One tip I would give you is to use a normal format opposed to this, what I would call,a"crack story format ". Other than that I enjoyed reading this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
| epic mario fan chapter 3 . 9/19/2012
this was a short chapter
| The guy chapter 3 . 9/16/2012
Sonic speeds up and goes faster than the plane. Sorry I couldn't resist
| Brandon Vortex chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
wow,plz continued and ive seen some dragonball reference. again plz continued
| guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
lol a over 9000 meme. also answer this question? try to spell muk backwards? if you have the answer post right now.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
Step 1: Use proper gammar. This fanfiction is hard to read in the state it is in.
Step 2: Be more sparse with the fourth wall abuse. This isn't a Deadpool fanfiction.
Step 3:Use less memes. Self explanatory.
Step 4: Be descriptive. Give descriptions of the characters and locations and at least try to show transition.
Step 5:Try to lengthen your chapters.
That is all.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
try making the chapters longer
| king rigby chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
why wont anybody give reviews please