Reviews for Year of the Sun
Jade chapter 11 . 11/14/2015 This is the most amazing 11 chapter story ever
I'mPessimistic chapter 2 . 10/4/2015
I like the concept and the story so far and I look forward to finishing reading this but there are a few things bothering me so far. 1. A baby that is only a few days old can't hold its head up on its own and needs to be carefully held with its head and neck supported 2. In my experience newborns don't smile, don't gurgle very much and I know they don't see many colours and have a sight range of a few meters. These are important things for you to know when writing a story so that it is more realistic and enjoyable for readers.
Satisfied Reader chapter 11 . 8/10/2015
Make a sequel?! The epilogue was such a teaser to the adventures yet to come
Guest chapter 11 . 7/18/2015
Very touchable story.I love family.;)
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 11 . 6/19/2015
Very sweet and cute:)
Alicia Trinidad chapter 7 . 5/31/2015
Its good but every baby is different!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/31/2015
I'm sad to see it end but it was a wonderful journey with Natsu and Lucy
Guest chapter 10 . 5/31/2015
I was scared for a second and then I remembered this is Nastu he would be jumping in joy.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/31/2015
Lol I was hoping for a lemon but I'll take what I can get
Guest chapter 8 . 5/31/2015
Awww that was beautiful
Guest chapter 7 . 5/31/2015
I sometimes forget to post review but this was beautiful along with the date chapter that I had to
kat5552 chapter 11 . 5/7/2015
This was such a cute story! All the cuteness and fluff; I couldn't stop smiling while reading it. Thanks for sharing!
lightningflamedragon246 chapter 6 . 4/19/2015
Wallace11 chapter 11 . 4/5/2015
Dear Jane
thank you for writing such a lovely story
it was such an original plot and unheard of by my ears
i found great joy in reading you story from start to finish

can't wait to read more stories

Wallace11 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Hi jane

love the story
very original plot line i can't wait to finish reading
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