Reviews for Forever Until
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
:( this is the saddest story I've ever read...:(
FaithLoveMusic chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
(sobbing uncontrollably) That...was...beautiful. So amazingly written, so sad, put chills all over me. Beautifully done.
panem chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
I am an emotional wreck. This was amazing, tragic, and beautiful.

I hate being so emotionally involved with fictional characters, but it feels like someone I truly cared about is gone. I cried an embarrassing amount.
Emma chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
SO MANY TEARS. Very very very well written :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
This is written so perfectly
Anja Fern chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Second time I read this, and I was bawling by the end, just like the first time. Exceptional writing skills, you are the next Suzanne Collins. If I give you my address, will you send me a copy of your first signed book? I'll pay you handsomely, I promise.
mrsodairmockingjay132 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I love this story, it is beautifully written but ridiculously sad. I can not stop crying
Katie Erikson chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
That story was very well written. i liked how you said "its his answer, his goodbye. And his thanks". that was the part where i really broke down sobbing. omg i am soo sad! i think you should write more hunger games fanfiction. You should write a very happy story. i suggest how katniss and peeta fell in love, after the war and slowly grew back together. or maybe katniss' pregnacy
Pandamao chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
I both love and hate you for writing this. After everything those two went through to have each other it just doesn't seem fair for something like this to happen. Especially not to Peeta. I'm sitting here writing this with tears in my eyes. This was so beautifully written, so tragic. I want Peeta to see his children grow up and to live a full long life. I want him to die as an old man in his bed. Sadly, life isn't about what we want. It just is. Except for the fact this made me cry and makes my heart heavy I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Omg I am crying so hard right now
LizaLovesPeeta chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I found this story on AO3 and left this commet there as well
What a beautifully written, touching and heartbreaking story. I'm sobbing at the mental image of our sweet Peeta, deteriorated by his illness, fading away, hurting inside knowing he was not going to see his children grow, what he worked so hard for and he's going to be gone so swiftly, yet he was resolved to be strong for Katniss. The detail of their goodnight kisses, just in case, was very poignant. I loved Haymitch, how he reassured Katniss that he was not alone, he was there for her and her children, and he gave her such insightful and moving advice. Johanna's mad support, fighting for her friend, priceless!.
My heart broke for Pria and what she understood much before they told her. The last sentences with the Mockingjay ong were breathtaking!
Wonderful, sad and beautiful.
Daria chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
You're a genius.
Maddie chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
OMJ! Publish this or whatever I love it even though Peeta dies! I feel like sobbing! I love it!
Arwen J Hui chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
WTF!? I'm bawling! Why am I crying!? So. Finnicking. Beautiful.
Blankagm chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Oh my god... I have to say that this is one of the most saddest stories I've ever read. I'm Spanish and I've always thought that to be really excited about a story it needs to be written in my mother tongue, but the fact is that I have been crying for the ¿last two hours? This story is increible, so sad, but so beautiful... I really congratulate you and I'm looking forwards to read more things written by you.
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