Reviews for Forever Until
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
This killed me.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
OhMyGod! I hate Peeta Death Fics, yet I love them at the same time. They are the only ones that can actually make me cry (I don't even cry when Prim or Rue die, but Peeta...) still yours was one of the only ones that made me cry properly, like I actually lost a loved one. This was so beautiful and captivating and I particularly loved Ray.
Collen DeWitt chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
I've read this a few times and it gets better each time. You really captured each of the characters. Especially Katniss, I could see her reacting to first hearing the news as she does in this story and then feeling regretful about it for years after. I hope you continue with these characters (Pria, Ray etc.). I saw that you have "Strands" but I'd love to read something longer. Good stuff here, good stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Oh my word! I bawled all the way through this story. It was utter perfection.
cayt326 chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
WOW! This was a beautiful story! It made me cry, but I loved it!
FandaticForeverAndAlways chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Oh my god. This was so sad, so sad. I don't read many Everlark fanfiction, more of a Gadge and Odesta only - but for some reason I dedecided to go ahead with it despite the length. And I'm not one bit disappointed. This was beautifully written! I loved every moment of it, and it was so so sad. I don't usually cry, but this made my heart ache and brought tears to my eyes.
Brilliantly written. Well done, well done!
Danielle chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Amazing made me cry a lot! You captured everything a goid emotional story should have. Ur a fantastic writer
Death-Muncher chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Good fic :)
nairamkhu chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Oh my God! Perfect and heart breaking! I love hunger games so much that I have read so many fanfics. All I can say is that you are one of the best, if not the best! You had me crying my heart out the moment i sensed that Peeta is dying. I felt every single fiber of pain in your story. It's as if I am part of it like I am really Katniss and I am losing Peeta. You wrote it in a way that we, the readers really captured the exact emotion there is in the story. When Peeta's having a fever and really really ill thinking they are still in the cave during the 74th Hunger Games, I knew then his life is almost over. You had me sobbing ever since that scene until the end and even after I'm done reading like about 30 mins. My 5 year old daughter approached me and asked me what's wrong. It was like i lost someone. just wow! This is my favorite! Thank you so much for writing this story. You have my support from now on.
Doc.amaro chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
From the moment i realized Peeta was dying, I couldn't help but cry. I cryed thought the whole story. It was equally beautiful and heart wrenching. Really well writen. And inspite of how sad, I couldn't put it down.
Princesa Lunar de Kou chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I'm in tears right now T_T this was so beautiful, so heartbreaking I just ...

Your writing was soooo good, I could feel all the emotions from the characters, I couldn't stop reading and I didn't want this to end because I knew that I would cry so hard. Thank u so much for writing this. I don't read everlak fics that much but I was on tumblr and somebody talked about this and with the review I got so interested. I don't regret my decision of reading this masterpiece
SimplyBria chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I knew early on this wouldn't have a happy ending... so I told myself I'd only read a little so I wouldn't get too sad... but I just couldn't. Your writing captivated me and I just couldn't stop, even though there were SO many tears haha. The way you wrote this was just so beautiful and powerful, it's crazy that words, put together so flawlessly, can make you feel such strong emotion. The ending, minus the death of course, was absolutely perfect - with the mockingjays and all. I'm gonna go read something super happy now... but just know despite the sadness and ache I know feel in my chest, I loved everything about this :)
hungergamesfan77 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I'm sobbing. All these tears I can barely see what I'm typing. The power you yield...

This was so sad ;_;
Cry chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
This made me cry
Liz chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Wow...just. Wow. Thank you.
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