Reviews for A Magnificent Depravity
Selfish.Shipper chapter 40 . 2/7

I cannot begin to express my LOVE for this.

This was EXACTLY what I was looking for omfg.

Sure, there are a few minor spelling mistakes, but does that even matter? There are spelling mistakes in the Percy Jackson books, but Rick Riordan's still famous.

I was not expecting this fic to be so good. I was a little weirded out at first (was not expecting the whole Sebby and Mey-Rin debacle) but this fic is just so different from the others. I love the way time was taken to slowly show the growing love and tension between the two, and it took Sebastian AGES to figure out his feelings. Everything here is just done so perfectly.

I have never seen a fic written so well in Sebastian's pov. It was cool to be inside his mind, to know what he was thinking the whole time. I love the change and honestly the transition from "I can't love" to "ah, well, actually" was done so well.

The ending hurt like a bitch but in the best way. I absolutely adore it. What a perfect ending I legit cannot-

Of course, who could deny loving all the dark and intimate moments, we're all sinners here. The characters were so perfect and honestly I did not see Lizzie killing herself at ALL. The whole arc just took me by surprise and I love that.

Gosh I just love this so much thank you for writing this like this was soooo much better to read than my math questions (though I should probably get those done)

Please keep up the good work, you have a natural talent!

(btw thanks for adding in another trans character, it's just so cool to see this type of stuff and I love it so much okay I'm done now sorry-)
blackkitty95 chapter 31 . 12/4/2016
I could barely read this chapter and actually skipped some bits. I really don't like the whole Ciel/Joanne thing and I doubt Ciel would ever be so wanton, shameless and provocative. I might continue reading, though.
blackkitty95 chapter 23 . 12/1/2016
This chapter is just precious. I really enjoyed the scene between Ciel and Mey-Rin. I very much liked the fact that Sebastian wanted to be possessed by Ciel, wanted to experience what Ciel experiences in their intimate moments. And then, you broke my heart. This story is so beautiful and brilliantly written...and right in the feels...
blackkitty95 chapter 21 . 11/24/2016
After a break from reading fanfiction I came back to continue this story; and damn, I had forgotten how incredible your writing is. This chapter was dark but beautiful and enticing in its own unique way. You really get these characters and you have a truly brilliant way with words. I applaud you.
blackkitty95 chapter 12 . 11/1/2016
Once again you wrote Sebastian brilliantly. Damn it, you just get him. I don't think that Mey-Rin would be so coy, teasing and taunting him about how he wishes he could be this intimate with Ciel. However, I liked this chapter very much. I'll say it again: I'm hooked.
blackkitty95 chapter 10 . 11/1/2016
Seductive, powerful, beautiful. Simply brilliant.
blackkitty95 chapter 6 . 11/1/2016
Wax porn!
This fic is incredibly hot without being pointless smut. Your writing skills are truly admirable. I am addicted.
blackkitty95 chapter 4 . 11/1/2016
Ohh, Sebastian is such a tease! I love, love, love the way you write him. And his interaction with Elizabeth (and his thoughts during that) was priceless. I love your take on this older Ciel as well. For some reason, the ending made me melt. Your writing is simply wonderful!
blackkitty95 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
I'm not a big fan of stories written in first person because the writing is often too simplistic. But yours is brilliant! I absolutely love how you write Sebastian and I have to say that I'm pretty much hooked already.
Guest chapter 39 . 10/9/2016
I am at a complete loss for words, for your the meaning and depth of your work cannot even begin to thoroughly be expressed by me. I applaud you, for you have made these characters your own, but have kept their individual personalities intact and have brought this story to a whole other level. This is the first, out of the thousands of pieces of literature I've read, fanfic or other ( and I am not exaggerating in the least ) that I have been fully captured by its plot and characters. This fic has enraptured me, and all at once has left me with even more perspective and sorrow over the truths that you bring to light.
Are you sure you aren't a famous author? Because I can assure you that your writing is no less than that of any renowned writer.
I regret to have read this at such a late time, but I couldn't be happier to have found it. I do hope you continue to write more, and look forward to reading more of your work!
-From a curious mind
Valmona chapter 40 . 9/18/2016
Here I am again, finished another 39-chapter long SebaCiel fiction but BUT it hasn't left me with the feelings your story has done! I knew I wouldn't be able to enjoy anything the same after I finished yours, and I see that more clearly now. MagDev is like a long lost lover I keep longing back to. When I feel melancolic enough, I often open my music player and play Drovak's Romance and feel the tears falling unintentionally :') What have you done, lady? All the emotions rush... Aahh... This is my testimony to your amazing skills. Please, make this story payable. I don't care which platform. I just wanna repay you somehow for creating such an amazing and devastating world! All the years you put into this! It very much hurts me reading it without paying something for this extraordinary talent! Please contact me.
Valmona chapter 33 . 9/5/2016
I have no words for you.. I couldn't have imagined the characters and the scenery and the feels (oh the feels) this lively if it wasn't your amazing writing skills. I'm on ch34 now and WOW! I can't spend the day without thinking of what will happen next, even if I'm at work! Amazing, amazing, amazing... I can't wait to get to the last chapter. Thank you for everything you put into this. You have an extraordinary talent!
Young Maiden Nea chapter 40 . 8/27/2016
This story.. I have no words. I'm so amazed at what people can write and how simple words arranged in specific patterns can affect me so much. I certainly did not expect it to end the way it did, and I must admit you had me crying at the end.
Thank you for taking your time to write this.
Aservis Roturier chapter 6 . 8/21/2016
Hello, my dear,
I was just re-reading this and came to a startling realisation: this chapter was the fertile ground that grew one of my stories! Your Ciel's troubles with his Dublin plant, and sending out Sebastian as a sort of right-hand man/hit man, gave birth to "His Butler-Famished" because I had rather followed Sebastian to Dublin to see what he got up to when he' slipped his collar and leash.

The praise is implied right? I mean, I AM reading it again...
Janiyah Connor chapter 40 . 8/7/2016
Can you review our fanfiction please wait after chapter 4 story/60371792-beyond-my-control-2-0
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