After a break from reading fanfiction I came back to continue this story; and damn, I had forgotten how incredible your writing is. This chapter was dark but beautiful and enticing in its own unique way. You really get these characters and you have a truly brilliant way with words. I applaud you.

Once again you wrote Sebastian brilliantly. Damn it, you just get him. I don't think that Mey-Rin would be so coy, teasing and taunting him about how he wishes he could be this intimate with Ciel. However, I liked this chapter very much. I'll say it again: I'm hooked.

Seductive, powerful, beautiful. Simply brilliant.

Wax porn!
This fic is incredibly hot without being pointless smut. Your writing skills are truly admirable. I am addicted.

Ohh, Sebastian is such a tease! I love, love, love the way you write him. And his interaction with Elizabeth (and his thoughts during that) was priceless. I love your take on this older Ciel as well. For some reason, the ending made me melt. Your writing is simply wonderful!

I'm not a big fan of stories written in first person because the writing is often too simplistic. But yours is brilliant! I absolutely love how you write Sebastian and I have to say that I'm pretty much hooked already.

I am at a complete loss for words, for your the meaning and depth of your work cannot even begin to thoroughly be expressed by me. I applaud you, for you have made these characters your own, but have kept their individual personalities intact and have brought this story to a whole other level. This is the first, out of the thousands of pieces of literature I've read, fanfic or other ( and I am not exaggerating in the least ) that I have been fully captured by its plot and characters. This fic has enraptured me, and all at once has left me with even more perspective and sorrow over the truths that you bring to light.
Are you sure you aren't a famous author? Because I can assure you that your writing is no less than that of any renowned writer.
I regret to have read this at such a late time, but I couldn't be happier to have found it. I do hope you continue to write more, and look forward to reading more of your work!
-From a curious mind

Here I am again, finished another 39-chapter long SebaCiel fiction but BUT it hasn't left me with the feelings your story has done! I knew I wouldn't be able to enjoy anything the same after I finished yours, and I see that more clearly now. MagDev is like a long lost lover I keep longing back to. When I feel melancolic enough, I often open my music player and play Drovak's Romance and feel the tears falling unintentionally :') What have you done, lady? All the emotions rush... Aahh... This is my testimony to your amazing skills. Please, make this story payable. I don't care which platform. I just wanna repay you somehow for creating such an amazing and devastating world! All the years you put into this! It very much hurts me reading it without paying something for this extraordinary talent! Please contact me.

I have no words for you.. I couldn't have imagined the characters and the scenery and the feels (oh the feels) this lively if it wasn't your amazing writing skills. I'm on ch34 now and WOW! I can't spend the day without thinking of what will happen next, even if I'm at work! Amazing, amazing, amazing... I can't wait to get to the last chapter. Thank you for everything you put into this. You have an extraordinary talent!

This story.. I have no words. I'm so amazed at what people can write and how simple words arranged in specific patterns can affect me so much. I certainly did not expect it to end the way it did, and I must admit you had me crying at the end.
Thank you for taking your time to write this.

Hello, my dear,
I was just re-reading this and came to a startling realisation: this chapter was the fertile ground that grew one of my stories! Your Ciel's troubles with his Dublin plant, and sending out Sebastian as a sort of right-hand man/hit man, gave birth to "His Butler-Famished" because I had rather followed Sebastian to Dublin to see what he got up to when he' slipped his collar and leash.

The praise is implied right? I mean, I AM reading it again...

Can you review our fanfiction please wait after chapter 4 story/60371792-beyond-my-control-2-0

Okay that was scary, cause I listened to the track while reading and it ended the second I finished reading, plus it fit exactly the descriptions of the music is the chapter. Like, it was fast when Sebby said it was fast etc. And I'm freaking out cause there is no way you could have planned this unless you were Sebastian himself! Anyways, love the story so far, can't wait to stay up all night and read it until I resemble a real life zombie. I bow to your writing prowess milord/milady.

Wonderful story. This was the best 'Black Butler' fanfic I've ever read. Really it's one of the best fanfic I've read. I've enjoyed reading it. I liked the mini-arc about Joanne, and the conflicting emotions surrounding being transgender. You captured them well and with respect to the struggle.

Holy. Shit.