Reviews for A Magnificent Depravity
chibi-shueiri chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
Well, Ciel is short so i guess naughty boy shorts are ok. ;)
The foot scene is hot! I wonder how in the world Ciel was able to stop? Poor Sebby. :) Can Elizabeth get a clue already? She's ok in an annoying sister way, but honestly, she's a c*ckblocker for both Sebby and Ciel. :)
Thanks for the update! :)
GODHELPME MAKING NEW ACCOUNT56 chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
That... Was awesome!
Didnt one manga book have Sebastian making out with Ciel's foot on the back cover?
DeliciousKrabKakes chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
Listening to Love Hurts by Nazareth while reading this... How fitting...
Lpandora chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
I LOVE IT!

"I feel likeā€¦" the boy stammered, trying to sort out his words, "It's difficult, Lizzie. You know, when one has a particular feeling, and he cannot help but be afraid of it."
- This line absolutely had me in stitches.

I love your interpretation of Sebastian's inner monologue. :) Very dry, but very insightful.

Update soon!
fawnthalia chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
I honestly can't wait to see where you take this. Sebastian's being so...Sebastian. I literally giggled when Elizabeth's gift was revealed. He's so wicked, I love how you've kept him in character.

Though, I do feel pretty sad for Ciel. The pendant was his mother's, after all. You'd think he'd be smarter when it comes to Sebastian preparing such a personal thing. He's what, fifteen here? Seriously, he needs to get with the program (Ciel, your butler's a daemon, remember?).

Your description of the renovated parlor was awesome. I truthfully wish I were better with vocabular; yours was outstanding in this instance. It wasn't too over the top (because I sometimes skip over stuff like that if it's too detailed and stuffy), but it gave me the actual essence of the architecture you were describing.

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next!
ChandraLuna chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
i love it. Its suh an interesting wtory. i want to see how it'll continue
The Only Sane One chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
It's lovely so far. Please update soon!
Erin Kamikaze chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
Ciel dealing with emotions is kind of funny.
chibi-shueiri chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Sneaky Sebastian. Can't wait for Sebby to "unravel" Ciel's desire. ;)
Thanks for the chapter! :)
WwLOLwW chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I like this story plz update soon!
DeliciousKrabKakes chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
:D :D :D :D :D
Instead of five stars, five smilies! :3
fawnthalia chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I'm so happy this isn't a one-shot! Despite your author's note in the beginning, my brain kept telling me that this wouldn't be multi-chaptered. The lack of pointless smut is awesome, and I can't wait to see how you develop these two!

Anywhoosle I'm curious as to where you'll take this. Somehow I think it'll be different. I've read tons of stories where Ciel's all like "I'm gonna dress myself!" and to be totally honest, I have a lot of faith that you'll make this different and not so smutty/plotless with this kind of lead.

Your Sebastian POV is pretty good. He's witty and dark and has an edge that I'm used to seeing. However, this is probably just me, but, it bothers me whenever he calls Ciel by his name. Yes, you did a wonderful job not doing that when he's actually speaking, but it still seems off for him to call Ciel that even in his thoughts. But again, that's all me, so do whatever you want with that. Sebastian probably does call Ciel by his name when he's thinking for all we know xD

Yay for regular updates! Though I won't hound you for them if you turn out to be overdue on one or two. So I hope you continue and I can't wait for the next!
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