|Reviews for The Snake and the Spider, Old|
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/6
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/2
Man I really hope you come back to this some day because it is amazing!
| Shattering chapter 5 . 8/2
Harry seems more like a punk actually than Hawkeye...he is wound up like some little teenager. I was hoping you would picture him more like an assassin than a schoolboy that he was in books. Always screaming and raging.
| Shattering chapter 4 . 8/2
You use some adjectives too frequently. For example 'emotionless'. Use other words for a change, some synonyms or better yet let the readers come to that conclusion for themselves.
| naturefire chapter 11 . 6/30
mou.. Im experiencing a very weird mixture of emotions right now, I definitely love your story but Im also rather scared/disappointed/anticipating/shocked e.t.c(something) of how Natasha reacted to harry just now. No idea why but Im getting very emotional over those two last lines of chapter 11.
| Ftxfusion24 chapter 11 . 6/6
please do more
| RandomObsessionsOfMine chapter 11 . 4/26
noooooooooooooooooooo poor natasha
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/23
You took a story that was going well and turned it into absolute crap within a few chapters
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
I don't think your portraying black widow correctly umm no offense it's just my opinion and lay off with the to thick accent ..please?
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/4
shit fic worst one ever
| YaGirlMo chapter 11 . 1/10
Sad to see this story hasn't been updated in a while. Hopefully you'll continue. I'll be waiting. Although, I have to say you have no right (Or I guess you do, it's your story, but you know what I mean) to abandon this story when it was just getting exciting, like seriously? You have no shame. I still love you though, only for writing this. I'll be back to check on this again soon, and hopefully it will be recently updated. But let me not push it.
| kabir0399 chapter 3 . 12/19/2015
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2015
| heath08 chapter 5 . 12/5/2015
Pretty good. I'll give you an eight.
I'm just at the point where he's torturing Boris.
| Ilessthan3KH chapter 11 . 11/18/2015
Hey, I was just wondering where you had intended the story to go from here or if you'd ever finish it? It's a fascinating twist, harry taking in Natasha instead of the other way around and you did a great job with it! I hope you are able to continue it :)