|Reviews for The Snake and the Spider, Old|
| Machamp chapter 11 . 9/18
Please continue the story I love this one alot!
And how you portrayed harry and Natasha was excellent please don't forget about this story
| MargaritaS chapter 11 . 8/28
2 years... i hope harry has done some major damage to the organization in that time :)
| Violete Death chapter 11 . 6/18
Sad... but it is a good story.
| JustIzzyHere chapter 1 . 5/21
ooohh! i good choice in partnering them up. interesting choice, but very bad ass. i wish i can see this live in action!
| The Nice Dalek chapter 11 . 5/14
This is brilliant, I wish there was more to it and I really hope you come back to this or post a rewrite.
| chicaalterego chapter 11 . 4/6
This fic is so good. Doing a re-read now, after so many years, I still dont get why you felt the need to do a re-do of the whole thing.
| 125b chapter 11 . 3/11
| zeps9001 chapter 11 . 1/29
Didn't really like this story. Harry is a big asshole in this. Fighting in a civil war and killing a lot of people with magic would make him apathetic to killing, but that in no way makes him amazing assassin in muggle world. And there's no excuse to what he did to Widow, he's supposed to be some bad ass who is one of the most notorious killer in both magic and normal world and some asshole says he has no choice and 5 minutes later he gets rid of her?
Your excuse that he wanted to be some lackey, when half the story he was mad at Widow for taking on a job he didn't want, makes zero sense.
| The Kromann chapter 11 . 1/28
A great story that leaves you hanging on the edge of your seat. looking forward to any future chapters
| TL14 chapter 11 . 1/4
I cannot express how fantastic this story is. those who can't see it just don't understand its awesomeness. if this was made into a book i would buy it. please continue it or finish the re-write, i know it doesn't seem like it is going to happen but this was truly fantastic. it evoked so many emotions. i love your writing style and the way you have taken the plot. thank you for this treasure
| Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 11 . 12/7/2016
| Oddballzebra chapter 11 . 12/7/2016
This story is so stupid.
| Squarekiddo chapter 11 . 11/28/2016
You took a good story and turned it into crap with a few chapters, im just happy its only 50k words so I didnt accidentally waste time.
You have a summary, use the damn thing correctly.
Never would have read this - a story that isnt my thing- if you used the summary correctly.
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/6/2016
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/2/2016
Man I really hope you come back to this some day because it is amazing!