Reviews for The Snake and the Spider, Old
MattBlack chapter 11 . 8/1
Natasha, you ungrateful SUKA!
Hicctooth456 chapter 11 . 7/19
Could you make it so that Harry joins SHIELD so that Natasha doesn't kill him
kristinamanga chapter 11 . 7/10
triste histoire...
Guest chapter 11 . 7/3
.dumb fuck
Loyal Reader chapter 11 . 4/7
I'll admit I didn't see this twist coming, and although I doubt you will ever update this story, or read this comment I will add my hope that Natasha will make the choice not to kill him in the end and harry will join shield.
Ps. Did harry get a fake tattoo for natasha's 'death'?
Mr.Nekko chapter 1 . 2/26
disappointing
herefotthesmut chapter 11 . 10/22/2021
it was so good then the last two chapters came an i hated it
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2021
killing of Natasha ruined this fanfic and also cemented you in my mind as a person that is better eliminated for the good of humanity
Chryseum chapter 3 . 5/6/2021
This is a pity, they don't work well together at all and both missions have gone wrong because of that even though they are both supposed to be the best... The summary is sadly just clickbait...
Aredianx chapter 2 . 3/15/2021
It would've made more sense if Harry had a serious personality. You know, after losing everyone he ever cared about. It's just not right for him to act like a retard comedic relief. Also, that introduction between them was weird. As was the reason why she wanted to repay him. Also, why would you try to write in Russian? Just use a different font and say they're speaking Russian. Overall, pretty weak story. But i admire your effort.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/3/2021
This went downhill very fucking fast. disappointing
Guestinator chapter 5 . 9/21/2020
And now the random scene with Hawkeye to bring in SHEILD and have Natasha torture so Harry feels guilty to bring them closer. Wow, that is just... Bad writing. Good luck with the story but damn.
Guestinator chapter 3 . 9/21/2020
Why does Harry feel that way, why does he care, why isn't he just leaving, why put himself at more risk with such a shitty and iffy 'partner'?

You have yet to explain this at all, and as this is all Key Points To The Plot Of The Story it becomes a large annoying plothole that pretty much ruins the story.
Fio Gonzlz chapter 9 . 6/16/2020
With just happend? Omg, in loving thissssss
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2020
An author who has to retard his characters to have the plot advance has very poor writing skills. If that’s your only card to play, you really should not be a writer. You are sad and pathetic and I shall be passing over anything else of yours in the future.
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