|Reviews for When He Forgets the Island|
| YoI1337 chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
(Too lazy to login otz) Graaaaah. This makes me feel so guilty! D: This has happened to me ALOT.
| Goddess Of Idiots chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
So sad, and i hate to admit, my villagers always die... So sad. Is it just me but finding their skeletons lying on the beach is a bit creepy. Just me, never mind. it would be alright if the game just automatically buried them. Anyway great story. :)
| Zee126 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
If I really was a god, I'd be terrible. Poor villagers, but yeah this happened to me before too. This is so sad but you wrote it beautifully. Nice job!
| lex4unanamus chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Wow. That was very, very sad. Beautifully written.
| Bellz chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
I love Virtual Villagers, and I always accidentally kill them... Hey, does anyone know how to make soup in the first one? Oh, yeah, and the story was amazing! The emotion was palpable!
| Tzarina8472 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Well, congratulations is all I must say to you.
Right here folks! This fella does it right! Click right up there at the top to learn how best to turn the cuddliest, cutest, most adorable children's game into a tragic horror story.
| maltese chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Yeah, it happened once when I was playing VV2... seeing skeletons everywhere, save for one kid alone, is enough for me to never, EVER, forget to pause the game and go sleep.
Great one-shot, and I'm proud to review the first VV fan-fic here! :)
| moonlightstar chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
(to lazy to login...) at the moment i have three villagers left, one is a adult who's afraid of fire...so i ended up doing to cheat to pass time witch has gotten me so many dead villagers in the past,.. I will prbiely write a virtual villagers story soon...
| rbnvnyba chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Sad story, but it was really good. I totally know the feeling, I didn't think it would be so complicated when I downloaded it, but I got all 5 and within a week I killed everyone. Usually most were on the first two days. And I died inside every time. It's just, it's a limited supply and it's not easy to get food! They expect to much. But at least we learn (eventually).
| prettyflower34 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
It's true I have killed off my villagers at least 20 times and I feel really ashamed that I forgot about them. There is nothing you can do when all you have is one child so death is inevitable which is a real shame. Either way I adore the story, the first and only in this category.
| I 4got 2 login chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Its awesome really good I love it!
| SteppenBow59 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
This has got to be some of the most beautiful, touching writing I've ever read. I'm being serious. Very few written works have brought me near tears like this. Please, keep writing, you are a natural. :)
Fellow Virtual Villagers fan!
| Sashaa chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Love it! kinda laughed because its so true and I love how you turned a small thing into a tragedy. Awesome!
| H2O Pokemon FAN chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
| Gishki chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
My, my, what a nice story. It was quite touching.