|Reviews for DC Phantom|
| Kevin and Miho chapter 6 . 2/7
Comic Appearances:The Hard Goodbye
Film Appearances:Sin City
Affiliation(s):Patrick Henry Roark
Portrayed by:Elijah Wood
Kevin is a primary antagonist in the film Sin City and the Sin City stories The Hard Goodbye and That Yellow Bastard. He is a mute cannibalistic serial killer under the wing of Cardinal Patrick Henry Roark.
Kevin came to Roark for religious counsel, having already given into his cannibalism and being wracked with guilt. Though appearing to be mute, he spoke to Roark in what he described as the 'voice of an angel'.
Roark took him in and used his considerable influence to cover up Kevin's killing, having him live on the Roark family Farm and allowing him to kill prostitutes from Old Town. Eventually Roark began sharing in his cannibalistic feedings as well. As well as a hiding place Kevin also uses the basement as a holding cell for his victims slash trophy wall where he hangs the heads of his victims (the only part he doesn't eat).
What isn't finished off by Roark and Kevin is fed to the feral dog they keep as a pet.
That Yellow Bastard
Kevin was at the Farm, where Roark Junior was torturing Nancy Callahan, sitting out and reading a bible, indifferent to the torture. It implies he was good friends with him, because of his loyalty to his father, Senator Roark. However, Kevin doesn't interact when Hartigan shows up and kills Junior.
The Hard Goodbye
Eventually Goldie began to suspect that the missing girls from Old Town were somehow connected to Roark and for her own protection she latched on to Marv. Kevin still managed to kill her (with what was never revealed) by sneaking into the apartment where she and Marv slept. When Marv went on his rampage, word got to Roark who had his parole officer Lucille kidnapped by Kevin who proceeds to sever and eat her left hand. When Marv arrives following the bloody cookie crumb trail of men he's tortured he is beaten senseless by Kevin and thrown in the cell with Lucille. Marv later escapes and returns with Wendy to finish him off. Marv lets Kevin beat on him until he gets close enough to cuff him to himself and knocks him out. Marv then saws his legs and arms off (some of it must have been while he was conscious) and lets the dog eat him alive. He doesn't utter a word during the whole bloody business leaving Marv unsatisfied when he finally cuts off his head. Marv eventually tracks down Roark and shows him Kevin's head, which the bishop cradles in grief before Marv kills him.
Although he seems completely harmless, Kevin is a dangerous psychopath. He kidnaps prostitutes, cuts their heads off (keeping them as trophies), and eats the rest of their bodies.
He is a very skilled fighter and practises an unspecified form of martial arts, with such speed and aggression that even Marv's brutal strength was outmatched. To add more to his bestiality, he wears metal claws.
Kevin never shows any human emotions, although Roark claimed that he was wracked with guilt over his past crimes at one point, which Kevin had certainly got over by the time of Goldie's murder, presumably as a result of encouragement from Roark. He has no mercy for his victims and seemingly enjoys their pain. He is also completely indifferent to his own pain, showing no care (not even opening his mouth) when Marv cuts him in pieces.
The meaning behind Kevin's death may be interpreted as a portrayal of the fallacies in Marv's logic being shown by reacting to violence with violence. As it leaves him unsatisfied and confused because it isn't effective in causing Kevin the pain he has dealt.
Comic Appearances:A Dame To Kill For
The Big Fat Kill
The Babe Wore Red
Film Appearances:Sin City
Sin City: A Dame to Kill For
Portrayed by:Devon Aoki
Miho is a mute female assassin of Japanese descent in Frank Miller's Sin City series. Along with Gail, she serves as an enforcer and defender of Old Town. She is often referred to as "Deadly Little Miho" by Dwight McCarthy in his narrations. To date, she has appeared in 3 of the Sin City yarns.
A Dame to Kill For
Nothing much is known about Miho's past, except that three years before she was saved by Dwight McCarthy in an attack by Tong gangsters. As Dwight himself explains to Goldie and Wendy, "three of the Tong who attacked Miho were dead by her hand. But the last two had her dead to rights. Point blank range." Because of this incident, she owes a life debt of honor to Dwight, and subsequently he is the only male character she is ever shown to have any non lethal interaction with, even taking orders from him at one point. It would appear they have some sort of friendship, as he is also the only character she ever shows any physical affection Dwight is shot multiple times and he discovers Ava Lord has been manipulating him to commit murder, he flees to Old Town. He seeks refuge from Gail, and in order to gain the help of the Girls of Old Town, he tells the story of saving Miho's life from Tong gangsters. As according to honor, the girls are obligated to help him in his plan for revenge. Miho is instrumental during the fight with Manute at Ava Lord’s estate, stopping him from reaching Dwight and crucifying him through the arms with her twin swords. This leads Manute to have a great disdain for the Old Town girls.
Miho is seen stamping on a man while he is down in an alley as Jim tries to escape The Colonel who is stalking him.
The Big Fat Kill
Her murderous actions causes a possible war between the police and the girls of Old Town, when she slaughters a cop, known as Jackie-Boy. Dwight then discovers that Jack was a police officer. As an attempt to prevent a war between the Old Town girls and the police, Dwight tries to dispose of Jack’s body in the tar pits. Upon arrival, he is attacked by some Irish mercenaries that are sent by Wallenquist. During the fight, Dwight accidentally sinks into the tar, and prays to God not to let him die. Miraculously, he is saved by Miho, who manages to pull him with her foot attached to a chain at the back of a car and she drags him just in time from the pits.
Miho and Dwight get involved in a mob war between the families of Don Magliozzi and Boss Wallenquist, after being told about a recent mob hit. Dwight is soon kidnapped by Vito, who is the nephew of Magliozzi, and is driven toward the Projects. Unknown to the hitmen is that Miho has been following Dwight to make sure that he is protected. Upon mention, Miho kills Spinelli, one of the goons, and they park in a hilltop rest area, overlooking the Projects. There, Miho "toys" with one of the hitmen as Dwight tells Vito to kill the other hitman, which is Vito's own brother Lucca. After Miho and Dwight are through, they head straight to Sacred Oaks to confront Don Magliozzi, driven by Vito. Miho simply cuts through the guards and Dwight makes his appearance. He tells the Don he is going to die along with Vito for the accidental death of Carmen, one of the Old Town girls. Miho wears rollerskates constantly in this story and seems to fight as effectively on these as she normally does on foot. For some reason, in this story, but none of the others, Miho is drawn as entirely white, defined by thin, black outlines, even though everyone else has detailed shadows and shading. This gives the strange impression that she glows with a ghostly light.
And Behind Door Number Three?
Wendy is setting a trap for a man they suspect is 'carving up' girls in Old Town. The enigmatic "Cowboy" is captured by the allure of Wendy and subsequently shot and tied up by Gail. Although the Cowboy is willing to confess to the cops, the girls have other plans and invite Miho to finish the job.
Roark Junior also known as the Yellow Bastard, is the son of Senator Roark and the nephew of Cardinal Roark. His public profile is that of a handsome, young playboy; he is in fact a sadistic pedophile with a particular interest in raping and murdering pre-pubescent girls (it is implied that he "came by his proclivities honestly" at the Roark family farm).
That Yellow Bastard
Junior's atrocities are covered up by his father and the Basin City police, but Detective John Hartigan is nevertheless determined to bring him to justice. After kidnapping 11-year-old Nancy Callahan, his fourth victim, Junior is pursued by Hartigan. He first incapacitates Fat Man and Little Boy and Junior's car, and then ends up killing Lenny and Benny with a .44 Magnum Smith & Wesson Model 29 revolver.
Junior manages to escape when Hartigan's heart condition acts up, but he then follows him to the dock, blowing off his hand, his ear, and his genitals with the Model 29, but is stopped by Bob with a Colt Python .357 Magnum revolver before he can finish him off; Junior lapses into a coma as a result of these injuries.
As Junior undergoes years of surgeries to repair his limbs and genitals, Hartigan is framed for Junior's crimes and serves eight years in prison. The surgeries leave Junior horribly disfigured; he now has bright yellow skin and blood, and emits a disgusting stench. However, he continues his depraved criminal career, having murdered dozens, maybe hundreds. He also pays a visit in Hartigan's cell where he punches him and leaves behind a letter containing the severed finger of a girl.
When Hartigan is freed from prison, Junior follows him to Kadie's Bar, where a 19-year-old Nancy is working as a stripper. Hartigan shoots him in the throat as he follows them in a high speed chase to Mimi's a local motel, but he nevertheless arrives, kidnaps Nancy and leaves Hartigan to die from hanging, but not before calling Koonz to prepare a party for him and fetch Fat Man and Little Boy to come to take Hartigan's body.
Junior takes Nancy to the Roark family farm and begins whipping her, hoping to rape and kill her
| coldblue chapter 6 . 2/6
It not quite a month yet until I review. Just by 4 days, but I rather do this on the weekend then the week.
I figured out the whole Danny powers idea. Also, I have some ideas, if your interested in adding this to the story of Tucker Foley AT LEAST having a his OWN Techno path powers as a Mutant.
First, let me explain why I keep suggesting Tucker becoming a Mutant. I always love that Tucker wanted to be more than nerd or someone smart at school during the "Danny Phantom". Tucker does not see Danny powers as freaky, BUT cool! Their are events in the "Danny Phantom" cartoon, where Tucker gains Ghost powers or artifacts to empower him. I thought if Tucker is in the "Marvel" Universe, so HUMANS could have their OWN powers.
Tucker is just a SIDE Character or Support chararter. Yeah, this story is MAINLY about Danny and him become the Phantom in the Marvel Universe, BUT if Tucker is going to be with Danny for a while to be protected and go school with him THEN Tucker has to be unique in his own way besides his Individuality and Personality.
Tucker Technopath powers suggestion:
Telepathy/Mental Connected to Technology- Tucker can hook up to the Internet of the world and look up information. With Tucker connected to the internet, then it ALSO increases his Intelligences to a IQ 200. It not going to be AUTOMATIC that Tucker REALY smart, but gradually through the time he with Danny through major events. So maybe it will take Tucker a 1 year or 2 years for Tucker Foley to be that smart, but he GRADUALLY does. This does cause Headaches and sometimes he can't stop the rush information to his head.
Magnetism- Tucker has power over METAL minerals. Not great control as Magneto, but he doe shave the gift. This allows Tucker a bit more power in his Technological advance environment. I'm hopping with Tucker growing IQ of 200, that Tucker would discover a passion for building and engineering ADVANCE computers in the world. Tucker with Magnetism isn't going to be OVERPOWERING. It took Magneto YEARS and he had Charles Xavier to help him with Magnetism. Tucker has a long way to go before he is as ADVANCE as Magneto. Tucker can sense Metals of all kinds, BUT Tucker has a Magnetic field that STOP Metal from penetrating his body UNCONSIOUSLY. So Tucker is protected by his powers if he gets hit or attack with Metal objects of ANY kind. The Problem is, his Magnetic Field disrupts Computers, so Tucker will have to train to LOWER the Magnetic Field around him in order to NOT affect Technology around him as much.
Depending if YOU Tucker to have powers, then YOU have to decide him to be a Metahuman or Mutant.
Danny Fenton/Phantom powers problem. I looked on the "Danny Phantom" Wikipedia on the website. You might want to try typing "Danny Phantom- Fenton Gadgets" that goes to a well worked web page, then type Danny Phantom in the Fenton Gadgets Wikipedia.
Here what I got from Danny Phyiscal Capabilities or Supernatural abilities:
Superhuman Strength- 10 to 30 tons. It varies on the website, but it give us a estimate. For "Marvel Phantom" I would suggest 10 to 20 tons that Danny Strength could be in his Phantom Form. His Human form could be 22,042lbs or about 1 ton. Basically Danny only has 10 percent of his power in his Human form.
Superhuman Durability- It does not give estimate how much Danny could take. Only references to Episodes of WHAT hits Danny. In Phantom form, maybe Danny can take 100 times more pressure or body as hard as Steel for his bones and muscle tissue. In Human form, about 25 times the pressure a Normal human could not take. Danny could be as hard a rock. I don't know what type of Rock, but it is difficult to draw blood from Danny by Normal means like Cutting him and putting a Needle in him.
Superhuman Stamina- His human form has the same amount of Stamina as 15 year old, BUT I hope you can change that. Maybe Danny Human form could run 3 5 minute miles before he tires out. In his Phantom form, it says Danny does not produce fatigue toxins, because he a ghost/dead. He can go for hours in his Peak in his Phantom form. He could go for HOURS or DAY'S even.
Superhuman Agility- In his Phantom form his agility, balance and body coordination are as great as the Finest athlete. This is good, but I was hoping his Phantom form could go a bit BEYOND Human Athletics. Maybe Danny has 10 times the Agility that Top level Athletes. In Human form, Danny is at the PEAK of Human Agility. I see Danny as a fast hitter, then a Power player.
Superhuman Reflexes- It does not say at how fast his reflexes are. I figure ten times faster than the Top Athletes in his Phantom form. In his Human form, Danny reflexes are at the Tope Athlete's level.
Superhuman Equilibrium- Danny in Human and Phantom form has perfect balance on instinctually. In sense, like Spider-Man/Peter Parker, but I feel Spider-Man would be better. Even slightly better. Phantom Form, Danny has the Balance of Top Athletic Gymnast. Human Form, Danny Balance is slightly below but has better balance over his body then most Teenagers and Adults who practice sports/Martial Arts.
Superhuman Speed- Danny does not have superhuman speed on the "Danny Phantom" Wikipedia. He can run faster in his Phantom form, then his Human. Let have some fun with this. Danny not a speedster, but he has to be faster. Human Form, Danny is as Fast as a Olympic Athlete. Phantom Form, He can go 50 to 75 MPH. Not so fast, but it does not turn Danny into a Speedster.
Superhuman Regeneration- On the website, Danny can heal in seconds, minutes, and hours. It unknown if he can regenerate Limbs, but his Custom/Suite heals with him. Let have fun with this. Danny can regenerate Limbs, BUT it takes hours and its PAINFUL, maybe even knock him unconscious because of the PAIN. Danny can't heal Internal Organs if he attack in his Phantom form. Human form, Danny perfectly Healthy and heals faster than humans. In human form, it difficult to Physically scar Danny, but Danny can scar. Danny Human form is Immune to Human diseases and less threatening Poisons, so Danny could get hurt by Poison BUT he needs ALOT more than the NORMAL human would need in ORDER to kill his Human form.
I hope that Danny Human Form gets noticeably STRONGER, but not too much.
I got these Danny Phantom powers from the Wikipedia, so I don't know how you feel about that, BUT it better than just GOING with random reviewers ideas and LISTEN to what the Fans have notice from the "Danny Phantom" cartoon.
I will review "DC Phantom" within the weekend.
Keep up the good work.
| Tara Terra chapter 6 . 2/3
A couple questions, will Jazz still turn evil and when is the next chapter going to be posted? Great story, I do wish Hive Minded would get updates still though.
| KenaBeliever chapter 6 . 1/28
Must say, the action in the story has a clear direction. I find myself stumbling around in a more of adjectives most always, but not in this story. It's a great feeling to be free of.
| kuro-okami13 chapter 6 . 1/22
I've been reading this and Hive Minded and just realized that it is 4 in the morning now... and I have my first day of classes tomorrow. They are great stories! So great, in fact, that I am going to be dead on my feet for my first day of college. Update soon, though I guess since you are on a hiatus you won't for a while (that is if I read your profile correctly).
| Bob Schwartz chapter 6 . 12/31/2013
Kickin' stuff. Indeed better than the original by far.
| coldblue chapter 6 . 12/20/2013
Finals are over for me, so I decide to give some suggestions
I hope that the pairing will stay a Phantom/Jinx pairing
Danny Fenton/Phantom power suggestion:
1) Super Strength- Whatever you believe is good enough for Phantom to have compare to DC Heroes/Villains. Somewhere around Super Girl, Wonder Women or Martian Man Hunter strength.
2) Super Speed- Slower than Kid Flash, but can react to his speeds.
3) Ectoplasm Enhanced Weapons/Objects- Basically, the idea of Danny pouring Ectoplasm into his weapons like his Ecto-Guns TWICE as powerful than normal Ecto-Guns. The Ectoplasm bleeds into object/weapons and causes Objects/Weapons to gain the ability to harm Supernatural or Magical beings.
4) Super Reaction: Being able to react to super speeds or object being able to hit him. That way he can react to weapons or Super Powered beings attack him like Kid Flash, but he can't keep up and protect him from all of his attacks.
5) Techno path- A form of telekinesis, but involves around technology and gives Danny an ability to build Machines or Gadgets. This does not make Danny Super Smart, but gives him an understanding on buildings Gadgets and Machines. So he can improve his parents or Fenton technology. Basically he a Metal-Head that not super smart, but knows how to build machines. This also gives Danny control over All Metal in a since.
Jinx Power suggestions:
1) Energy/Ectoplasm manipulations- She can use and create Ectoplasm into solid objects, like walls, domes, spikes, swords and drills. She can't create Ectoplasm to create guns or bombs, BUT she can power up he Hex Blast/Bolts at people to give them even more Bad Luck or to destroy dense material like Steal or Titanium.
2) Super Enhanced Body- Her fighting stlye gets even more dangerous with her ability of Gymnastic being powered to Spider-Man like abilities to take damage, heal, fast, strong, reflex's and a sense of balance of her surroundings. Like super cat like reflex's.
3) Intangibility- This based on the idea she develops more Ghost like powers and if she Vlad Masters/Plamius Daughter. Same limitations as a Ghost.
Kyd Wykkyd Power Suggestions
1)Telepath- Develops this ability so he could communicate with Jinx and Phantom if he can't use Morse Code or Sign Language on Missions. It not as dangerous as Gorilla Grodd or Martian Man-Hunter, but it his Telepath has the ability to be as great as theirs or possibly better.
2) Shadow/Darkness manipulations- I suggested this idea so many times, but I still like it for Kyd Wykkyd style. He can create Darkness or Manipulate the shadows at will like Nightingle and Ebon from "Static Shock" Comics/Cartoons. It not as great as both their powers, BUT he can use both of them giving him better adaptability to use them in day light though it still weak against Sun Light.
3) Healing Factor- I thought that even though Wykkyd not a power player that he needs advantage. He can heal himself from gun shot wounds, slash's and explosions. Though it gets dangerous when his limbs get cut off. He can reattach his limbs and work as they were good as new, BUT he can't regrow them. Gives him immunity over most normal/deadly poisons to mortals, ghost and meta-humans alike, BUT if given too 10 times the amount poisons that could kill a hundred men, he can die.
I still support the idea of Jinx being Vlad Masters/Plasimus daughter and being related to Bat Girl by being the daughter of Commissioner Gordon current wife. I don't know her name though.
I vote for Danny Fenton/Phantom to be Neutral person in the DC universe and work under the Government with Cadmus out of the Injustice League control/Manipulation.
Keep up the good work.
| Slade chapter 6 . 12/13/2013
Right this is getting ridculous!
| Sin chapter 6 . 12/9/2013
One of the best stories. And of course it has long updates.
But it's worth it, just please don't give it up. Good luck to you. And good returning)
| martian-general-bookworm chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
This fic is glorious. MOAR I demand it!
Seriously though, this fic is both interesting and fascinating in the way that this different environment is twisting Danny's thoughts in directions he would have never contemplated before. The academy's manipulation is subtle but not invisible, but Danny still doesn't seem to be becoming corrupt as he is having the biggest eye opener of his life, which leaves me curious how will he come out of this? A cynical vigilante? A Rogue (LOVE your description of a rogue)? The next ghost King (what a twist XD)? A more successful version of Maddie and Jack? You make this all seem possible.
You officially have yourself a follower!
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/28/2013
I must say that I am overjoyed to see this fanfiction after the dispair I felt when i saw how long it had been since Hive Minded had updated. I cannot wait to see how this fanfiction turns out. Thank you for all your work.
Always a friend,
Elias G. Wolfe
| allietheepic7 chapter 6 . 11/27/2013
update? *pokes* need update.
| FinalGuardian chapter 5 . 11/25/2013
I like how Danny is in a more serious setting; he really didn't mature until a season or more so seeing him actually training and developing is cool.
| Lone wolf aka Black Hawk Omega chapter 6 . 11/13/2013
Noo don't stop it was going great!
| coldblue chapter 6 . 11/11/2013
What with the situation on updating "DC/Marvel Phantom".
I'm only doing this since it been a month since you updated your profile/Fan Fiction Homepage.
I'm busy with college papers, so really I don't expect a Update for a while.
Just a notice or something.