|Reviews for DC Phantom|
| ShadowPillow chapter 1 . 5/2
Oooh, I'm getting really excited to read this story. Danny right after he got powers? Most definitely not overpowered? Lots of ominous foreshadowing? Yeah, definitely love it so far.
| xxxrae97xxx chapter 6 . 3/23
This is well written great job. I enjoy it a lot more than your other fic.
| Dark Domination chapter 6 . 3/15
Hope this updates soon. I really enjoyed the predecessor to this fic and look forward to how you rewrite this one.
| PumaWarrior chapter 6 . 2/3
Mmmm, I don't seem to like this as much as HIVE Minded, but it's still a great work. Keep it up and good luck!
| DragonReaperKing chapter 6 . 1/7
update this i need to read more
| Scar chapter 6 . 12/23/2014
Fuck your a useless cunt.
| scout chapter 6 . 12/4/2014
This story is awesome. I've read most of your stuff and this is definitely the best. Your general writing style is really enjoyable too, you do suspense very well so I'm hoping to see it emphasized in interesting ways here.
(I think the only one I've held out on is the Harry Potter self-insert because I have a fundamental problem with stories like that)
If you haven't seen the show "Marvel's Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D" then I highly recommend it. You could combine some of Captain America 2 and the show for an extremely interesting S.H.I.E.L.D/Hydra action involving Danny/Jazz. You could even not include the cap'n given that there's enough source material out there to gloss over his bits and implement some creativity.
Just a recommendation for some stuff that I think that would be really cool.
Keep the story up it's one of my favorites on the site.
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 6 . 11/18/2014
So full of violence and action...this chapter was so AWESOME!
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 5 . 11/18/2014
So...the conclusion of Dr Chang's speech is...Danny's unique...and awesome...
Anyway, I really liked how you put Jinx and Red Hood and even Mammoth in previous chapters (XD he can't even stand against Phantom XD); and I really enjoy this story :P
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 4 . 11/18/2014
You don't suck at timing...umm...
Anyway...the chapter was awesome! A little confusing because of all the villains; and with that, I mean, I suck at remembering names and what they'll be teachers of...But it waw great, nevertheless
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 3 . 11/18/2014
I guess this means HIVE Minded will be discontinued...?
Oh well, at least there's still DC Phantom :3
So...ghosts don't sleep...well, unless you're being affected by Undergrowth's plants... At least Danny can still meditate :/
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 2 . 11/17/2014
Ugh, school... I HATE it! Especially the homework, ugh...oh well...
Anyway...The Headmistress doesn't like Danny, so he'll be having a hard time at school; good thing he's immune to mind-control, huh? :P
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
Ok...nice knowing you, Danny, if you survive the shopping trip...you'll be my hero... :3
| bibliophilea chapter 6 . 11/3/2014
This is pretty fantastic! I love your take on the HIVE Academy, and the way they slowly push their students into a mindset necessary to be a successful super-villain. I love the way you developed Kid Wykkid's character. I look forward to the next installment, even if it takes a year to update! (::
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/25/2014
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