Reviews for The Order of the Phoenix |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Not a bad story. Your habit of listing your review answers is annoying and the reader is unable to understand them without referring to the actual review itself, which we do not do. |
![]() ![]() Tremendous story. Most enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() Just a thought, the legendary griffin was supposed to have an eagle’s type head and front half, and a lion’s rear half, not the other way round! Is your Imperial version something else, ignoring its size? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione really has a disdain of her parents- in the books AND fan fiction! The older she gets the less time she spends with them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! Every time I read this chapter I hope it changed to where the Dursley’s were killed! And dumbledore too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never thought dumbledore would not go to the rescue of Hogsmead! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's hopeless. He's still stupid no matter what fanfic I read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry just cant get rid of his own stupidity. Okay he made a mistake opening that door but he SHOULD'VE GOT OUT RIGHT AFTER HE SAW WHATS INSIDE BUT INSTEAD HE FREAKIN' STARED AT EACH ONE OF THEM! |
![]() ![]() So...Harry's not certain Ginny will go to a dance with him but he'll go ahead and alter her body, mind and future in drastic measure without either of them having a clue ? Now she too can ask herself if she is insane. She didn't even notice V gifting her with parseltongue, after all, how often and severely will that affect her life. But Harry's "gift" is far more intrusive, of questionable moral and ethical value and will affect every minute of her life. She didn't ask for that. Still, your story is interesting. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry in advance, but the Hermione started to speak from me. Alexander was not Persian. He was fighting the Persians. He was known as Alexander the Great, he was a king of Macedonia, and the man who destroyed the empire of Dareios the third. I'm sorry again, but I can't understand that while you adress Osiris and Iris as god/godess you call Loki a mere prankster? He was much more than that if you'd made some research on Northern Mythology. But for at the very least, he should be called a god. Anyway, there is a thing I felt rather confusing about the story; And there are more fics that has the same problem - why is swordfighting and martial arts so important? In the wizarding world they would be certainly useless. Here is a situation, there is a duel, a wizard versus a swordsman. Who would win? Obiously the wizard, in fact, he would barely need to lift a finger. With a small movement of his wand he could, at the very least, stun his opponent. The swordsman couldn't even get close, but even if he could - by some miracle that is - he could be easily stopped with some spell. Because I am sure there is something. They are wizards after all. |
![]() ![]() Practical Fighting Techniques - PFT... ...pffft |
![]() ![]() Draco the dumbsturck red ferret |
![]() ![]() Yeah no. I'm not reading any more of this absurd wankery. |
![]() ![]() What's up with this special snowflake wankery? It's absurd, author. |
![]() ![]() It's kinda dry... |