blaise is not a girl

This story is absolutely rubbish. This is a shame for JK Rowling also. U dont have the slightest creativity as a writer. Kindergarden. children can do it better than u.I just wasted my time reading this stupid tale

This is looking to be an excellent story, but I hate Ginny. Give me Drarry, Snarry, even Harmonie but I hate Hinny. I might come back to this later. Not a reflection on your story by any means as I was enjoying the interplay between Harry and his mind, loved trying to work out the characters. Just hate the romance xx

Skipped chapter 2, hope I didn't miss anything exciting. Just couldn't read it, sorry

So why did he just stand there and take the killing curse?!

OK, so why did he let himself be killed? What purpose did it serve?

I’ve always loved a good super Harry and Ginny story, I’m loving the story :)

So why did Harrry just stand there and take the killling curse? It served what purpose?

Harrys kinda cocky..like he’s to a little TO cocky. He gives of the image that he's better than everyone else. Thats not Harry at all . Also, Ginnys name is not “Virgina” its Ginerva.

Good story

I realise you're probably long past all this and aren't on this page anymore etc considering you published this story in 2002, but I just want to say that despite a few details that I dislike and quite a few spelling mistakes, you've written a wonderful story that is very close to how I always wished Harry Potter had been written so well done! You're out-doing JKR! I will say however that you're pissing me off by calling Ginny 'Virginia' because her full name is Ginnerva not virginia!

Ruskbyte, I wanted to PM this request to you, however you have disabled such. I was wondering if I may use your description of an Imperial Arch Griffin for one of my own stories I am working on. I will of course give credit to you if I do use it. If I never receive a reply, I shall assume it is a positive response and think myself able to use it, though I will have a backup just in case.

Quite interesting, and written oh so long ago!

Harrys kinda cocky :/

I literally can’t with this fucking fanfiction I only got to chapter 6 and quite because of how ducking rude and bigheaded Harry in this story is he’s quite cocky most of the time...fuck it! He’s cocky all the damn time! The interior of this Harry gives off the interpretation that’s he’s better than everyone else! I absolutely and utterly hate it!